[gatein-commits] gatein SVN: r3068 - portal/branches/EPP_5_0_0_Branch_Docs/Enterprise_Portal_Platform_Release_Notes/en-US.

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Author: smumford
Date: 2010-05-12 18:55:10 -0400 (Wed, 12 May 2010)
New Revision: 3068

Modified:
   portal/branches/EPP_5_0_0_Branch_Docs/Enterprise_Portal_Platform_Release_Notes/en-US/Release_Notes.xml
Log:
JBEPP-279: Updated 'Introduction'section

Modified: portal/branches/EPP_5_0_0_Branch_Docs/Enterprise_Portal_Platform_Release_Notes/en-US/Release_Notes.xml
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--- portal/branches/EPP_5_0_0_Branch_Docs/Enterprise_Portal_Platform_Release_Notes/en-US/Release_Notes.xml	2010-05-12 22:40:54 UTC (rev 3067)
+++ portal/branches/EPP_5_0_0_Branch_Docs/Enterprise_Portal_Platform_Release_Notes/en-US/Release_Notes.xml	2010-05-12 22:55:10 UTC (rev 3068)
@@ -6,14 +6,11 @@
 	<section id="sect-Release_Notes-Introduction">
 		<title>Introduction</title>
 		<para>
-			These release notes contain important information related to &PRODUCT; &VERSION;. New features, known problems, resources, and other current issues are addressed here.
+			&PRODUCT; offers an intuitive, easy to manage user interface and a proven core infrastructure to enable organizations to quickly build dynamic web sites in a highly reusable way. By bringing the principals of Open Choice to the presentation layer, &PRODUCT; &VERSION; maximizes existing skills and technology investments.  
 		</para>
 		<para>
-			&PRODUCT; is the merge of two mature Java projects; JBoss Portal and eXo Portal. This new project takes the best of both offerings and incorporates them into a single J2EE deployment archive. The aim is to provide an intuitive user-friendly portal and a framework to address the needs of today's Web 2.0 applications.
+			By integrating proven open source frameworks such as JBoss Seam, Hibernate, Tomcat and JBoss Cache &PRODUCT; takes advantage of innovations in the open source community. As well, &PRODUCT; version &VERSION; is fully tested and supported by Red Hat, and is certified to work on many leading enterprise hardware and software products.
 		</para>
-		<para>
-			Further, by integrating best-of-breed open source frameworks such as JBoss Seam, Hibernate, Tomcat, and JBoss Cache the Platform takes advantage of innovations in the open source community. As well, &PRODUCT; is fully tested and supported by Red Hat, and is certified to work on many leading enterprise hardware and software products.
-		</para>
 	</section>
 
 	<section>