[jboss-cvs] JBossAS SVN: r82325 - projects/docs/enterprise/4.3.3.1/readme/en-US.

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Author: irooskov at redhat.com
Date: 2008-12-16 18:26:20 -0500 (Tue, 16 Dec 2008)
New Revision: 82325

Modified:
   projects/docs/enterprise/4.3.3.1/readme/en-US/Release_Notes_CP03_FP01.xml
Log:
updated with fixes from Jay


Modified: projects/docs/enterprise/4.3.3.1/readme/en-US/Release_Notes_CP03_FP01.xml
===================================================================
--- projects/docs/enterprise/4.3.3.1/readme/en-US/Release_Notes_CP03_FP01.xml	2008-12-16 21:23:31 UTC (rev 82324)
+++ projects/docs/enterprise/4.3.3.1/readme/en-US/Release_Notes_CP03_FP01.xml	2008-12-16 23:26:20 UTC (rev 82325)
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
 				</para>
 			</note>
 	</section>
-	<section>
+	<section id="Updated_Components">
 		<title>Updated Components</title>
 		<para>
 			Listed in this section are the components which were included in the previous Feature Pack and have been updated within this release. This information is included within the release notes in order to assist with the decision of upgrading to this release. 
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
 <section id="Upgrading_or_Installating_a_Feature_Pack_for_the_first_time">
 		<title>Upgrading or Installing a Feature Pack for the first time</title>
 		<para>
-			The sections to follow detail how to upgrade from a previous Feature Pack release or install a Feature Pack for the first time. 
+			The sections that follow detail how to upgrade from a previous Feature Pack release or install a Feature Pack for the first time. 
 		</para>
 		<important>
 			<para>
@@ -160,6 +160,11 @@
 			<para>
 				This section contains information related to upgrading from JBoss Enterprise Application Platform Feature Pack version 4.3.0_CP02_FP01.
 			</para>
+			<warning>
+				<para>
+					Before updating, be sure to back-up all files for your application and installation configuration.
+				</para>
+			</warning>
 			<formalpara>
 				<title>Updating using ZIP</title>
 				<para>
@@ -188,15 +193,21 @@
 					</para>
 				</listitem>
 			</orderedlist>
+			<para>
+				For a detailed list of updated components in this release see the <xref linkend="Updated_Components"/> section.
+			</para>
 			<formalpara>
 				<title>Updating using RHN</title>
 				<para>
 					Updating your existing EAP 4.3.0_CP02_FP01 RHN installation is different depending on the version of Red Hat Enterprise Linux you are running. 
 				</para>
 			</formalpara>
+				<para>
+					Before following these steps to update your installation, be sure to back-up your application and installation configuration. 
+				</para>
 			<formalpara>
 				<title>
-					On Red Hat Enterprise Linux 4:
+					Red Hat Enterprise Linux 4 upgrade steps
 				</title>
 				<para>
 					Make sure you are subscribed to the correct channels on RHN (as described in <xref linkend="Install_on_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_4"/>) and then run the following command with root level access:
@@ -207,7 +218,7 @@
 </programlisting>
 			<formalpara>
 				<title>
-					On Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5:
+					Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5 upgrade steps
 				</title>
 				<para>
 					Make sure you are subscribed to the correct channels on RHN (as described in <xref linkend="Install_on_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5"/>) and then run the following command with root level access:
@@ -221,6 +232,9 @@
 					Before applying this update, make sure all previously released errata relevant to your system have been applied. For Red Hat Enterprise Linux 4 run <command>up2date</command> without parameters and for Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5 run <command>yum update</command> without parameters. 
 				</para>
 			</important>
+			<para>
+				For a detailed list of updated components in this release see the <xref linkend="Updated_Components"/> section.
+			</para>
 		</section>
 		<section id="install">
 			<title>Installation Notes</title>