[richfaces-svn-commits] JBoss Rich Faces SVN: r13877 - in trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook: modules and 1 other directory.
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Sat Apr 25 18:27:33 EDT 2009
Author: smukhina
Date: 2009-04-25 18:27:33 -0400 (Sat, 25 Apr 2009)
New Revision: 13877
Modified:
trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/hiw.xml
trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml
trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/intro.xml
Log:
RF-5768 - English is checked
Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/hiw.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/hiw.xml 2009-04-25 16:01:30 UTC (rev 13876)
+++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/hiw.xml 2009-04-25 22:27:33 UTC (rev 13877)
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
<title>Building the control with <rich:inputNumberSlider></title>
<para>
The <emphasis role="bold"><property>rich:inputNumberSlider</property></emphasis> component in the Photo Album Demo is used as a control that helps a user to change photos size while previewing an album.
- A handler position on the slider track corresponds to a particular value of image size.
+ A handler position on the slider track corresponds to a particular value of an image size.
The component is included into the page with the help of <emphasis role="bold"><property>ui:include</property></emphasis>:
</para>
<programlisting role="XML"><![CDATA[...
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@
...]]></programlisting>
<para>
- When the <emphasis role="bold"><property><rich:inputNumberSlider<</property></emphasis> is rendered at first its default value for image size is 120 px.
+ When the <emphasis role="bold"><property><rich:inputNumberSlider<</property></emphasis> is rendered, at first its default value for image size is 120 px.
</para>
<figure>
Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml 2009-04-25 16:01:30 UTC (rev 13876)
+++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml 2009-04-25 22:27:33 UTC (rev 13877)
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
<ulink url="https://anonsvn.jboss.org/repos/richfaces/management/design/realWorldDemo/prototypes/ver_8/">https://anonsvn.jboss.org/repos/richfaces/management/design/realWorldDemo/prototypes/ver_8/</ulink>
</para>
<para>
- In order to document key concepts and conceptual representation of data of the <property>Photo Album Demo</property> application the Entity Relation Diagram (ERD) is created.
+ In order to document the key concepts and conceptual representation of data of the <property>Photo Album Demo</property> application the Entity Relation Diagram (ERD) is created.
The diagram also identifies the relationships among all major entities within the system and their significant methods and attributes.
It provides a structural view of the system that can be complemented by other dynamic views in use case models.
</para>
@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>Create a new project directory on your hard disk;</para></listitem>
- <listitem><para>Browse to the directory with the archetype (<code>richfaces\cdk\maven-archetype-seam-app</code>), switch to command line and type the next command <code>mvn install</code> to install the archetype in your repository;</para></listitem>
- <listitem><para>Then browse to your project directory and type in command line</para>
+ <listitem><para>Browse to the directory with the archetype (<code>richfaces\cdk\maven-archetype-seam-app</code>), switch to the command line and type the next command <code>mvn install</code> to install the archetype in your repository;</para></listitem>
+ <listitem><para>Then browse to your project directory and type in the command line</para>
<para><code>mvn archetype:generate </code></para>
<para><code>-DarchetypeGroupId=org.richfaces.cdk </code></para>
<para><code>-DarchetypeArtifactId=maven-archetype-seam-app </code></para>
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
</itemizedlist>
<para>
- The EJB module contains the entity diagram classes and the classes for interaction with database. The structure of EJB module is illustrated below:
+ The EJB module contains the entity diagram classes and the classes for interaction with a database. The structure of EJB module is illustrated below:
</para>
<figure>
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>Since the Photo Album Demo uses Facelets technology the main page <code>index.xhtml</code> represents an <include> (or facelet) wrapped with the <emphasis role="bold"><ui:composition></emphasis> tag.
+ <para>Since the Photo Album Demo uses the Facelets technology the main page <code>index.xhtml</code> represents an <include> (or facelet) wrapped with the <emphasis role="bold"><ui:composition></emphasis> tag.
This tag is used to trim unnecessary markup in the facelet.
Any content outside of <emphasis role="bold"><ui:composition></emphasis> tag is ignored by the Facelets view handler.
A facelet can be incorporated into another page or facelet with the help of <emphasis role="bold"><ui:define></emphasis> and <emphasis role="bold"><ui:include></emphasis> tags pointed to by the <emphasis role="bold"><ui:include></emphasis> "src" attribute.
Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/intro.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/intro.xml 2009-04-25 16:01:30 UTC (rev 13876)
+++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/intro.xml 2009-04-25 22:27:33 UTC (rev 13877)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
It provides social services for uploading photos, storing and previewing them,
creating your own albums and sharing them with other users, searching albums,
photos or users, managing the environment.
- Newcomers or not registered users can navigate through other users shelves and albums
+ Newcomers or not registered users can navigate through other users' shelves and albums
in "Anonymous mode", but in this case no possibilities to create personal
shelves or albums or upload photos are available.
</para>
@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- <emphasis>built-in Ajax capability</emphasis> - the <property>RichFaces</property> offers
+ <emphasis>Built-in Ajax capability</emphasis> - the <property>RichFaces</property> offers
both component-wide and very flexible page-wide Ajax support with no need to write any JavaScript code;
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- <emphasis>highly customizable look-and-feel</emphasis> - the <property>RichFaces</property> have special feature called
+ <emphasis>Highly customizable look-and-feel</emphasis> - the <property>RichFaces</property> have special feature called
<ulink url="http://www.jboss.org/file-access/default/members/jbossrichfaces/freezone/docs/devguide/en/html/ArchitectureOverview.html#Skinnability">Skinnability</ulink>.
</para>
</listitem>
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