Hi,
Very interesting ! Congrats !

But maybe there are a bit too much screenshots,especially the "eclipse" screenshots.
i.e, the ones just showing code could be replaced by textual code snippets and other just showing "Run configurations ..." are maybe overkilled. 

An alternative could be to skip most of the screnshots and add a screncast.

Just my 2 cents,

Seb


 

On Wed, Oct 31, 2012 at 8:00 PM, Lucas Holmquist <lholmqui@redhat.com> wrote:
Hi,

I just finished a "first draft" of "Communitizing"(thanks jay) the JBDS Android Cordova Tutorial. 

http://staging.aerogear.org/docs/guides/CordovaAndroidDevJBDS/

I think it could benefit from slicing it into some sections.  


feedback?

-Luke






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