Thanks for the review [~crobson]. I've attached your corrections as an image (easy to see changes there).
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Text based:
HOMEPAGE
"Aerogear provides a set of flexible and extensible libraries, as well as server side components, to simplify mobile development across platforms and common repetitive infrastructure tasks. " - wow, this is really a mouthful! It would be great to simplify this message a lot. Maybe something like the following:
"Aerogear provides flexible, extensible libraries and server side components that will simplify your mobile development and infrastructure setup across platforms."
"Hey listen! OAuth2 support on AeroGear " <-- 'Hey listen!' feels almost rude to me. "NEW!" or "Check it out!" feel much friendlier
" A unified API lets you send push notifications from theUnified Push Server via Google Cloud Messaging,Apple’s APNs, Amazon's ADM, Microsoft's WNS andMPNS, SimplePush or WebPush to any mobile device. "
Another mouthful and feels like too much to read. I wonder if we could say "Send push notifications from the Unified Push Server via 7 messaging protocols to any mobile device" and do a hover on # messaging protocols to show all the things we support?
http://staging-aerogearsite.rhcloud.com/push/
The AeroGear UnifiedPush Server is server that allows sending native push messages to different mobile operating systems, such as Android, iOS, Windows or Firefox OS/SimplePush.
http://staging-aerogearsite.rhcloud.com/security/
Mobile security for humans, integrating your mobile application to already existent into existing infrastructure.
http://staging-aerogearsite.rhcloud.com/sync/
Full real-time data sync where updates are initiated from both the client and server over a bi-directional channel. This feature provides both, a specific server side sync engine, as well as a client side sync engines for Android, iOS and JavaScript. The implementation is based on Google’s Differential Synchonrization by Neil Fraser.
http://staging-aerogearsite.rhcloud.com/cordova/
AeroGear Cordova makes developing apps with Cordova easier by adding plugins for things that are hard to do right.
http://staging-aerogearsite.rhcloud.com/getstarted/guides/
Learn how to make Take the first steps in mobile development on each of the supported platforms
Take the your knowledge further and learn about advanced concepts supported by client libraries
In several Tutorials and guides that will help you can learn all about the UnifiedPush technology
http://staging-aerogearsite.rhcloud.com/docs/planning/
Listing of the planned features for the AeroGear project.
http://staging-aerogearsite.rhcloud.com/community/
Get involved,; be part of the Aerogear community. (that would be a semicolon instead of a comma)
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