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Author: jaredmorgs
Date: 2013-01-30 01:22:19 -0500 (Wed, 30 Jan 2013)
New Revision: 9098

Modified:
   epp/docs/branches/6.0/Reference_Guide/en-US/modules/AuthenticationAndIde=
ntity/LDAP.xml
Log:
BZ#856453 - Committed minor peer review comments from Tomas K into the guid=
e. Have not restaged guide. Changes will be visible when other changes are =
made and restaged.

Modified: epp/docs/branches/6.0/Reference_Guide/en-US/modules/Authenticatio=
nAndIdentity/LDAP.xml
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--- epp/docs/branches/6.0/Reference_Guide/en-US/modules/AuthenticationAndId=
entity/LDAP.xml	2013-01-30 05:07:43 UTC (rev 9097)
+++ epp/docs/branches/6.0/Reference_Guide/en-US/modules/AuthenticationAndId=
entity/LDAP.xml	2013-01-30 06:22:19 UTC (rev 9098)
@@ -48,9 +48,6 @@
       <para>
                               If you are using a third party directory ser=
ver (<application>OpenDS</application>, <application>OpenLDAP</application>=
 or <application>Microsoft Active Directory</application>), refer to the ap=
propriate documentation for that product.
                            </para>
-      <para>
-                              These, and other appropriate settings, shoul=
d be adjusted to suit your circumstances.
-                           </para>
     </step>
     <step>
       <para>
@@ -66,7 +63,7 @@
   <section id=3D"sect-Reference_Guide_eXo_JCR_1.14-LDAP_Integration-LDAP_i=
n_Read-only_Mode">
     <title>LDAP in Read-only Mode</title>
     <para>If LDAP is configured to operate in read-write mode, changes to =
user and group information made in the portal platform is written back to t=
he directory server. </para>
-    <para>If LDAP is operating in read-only mode. existing user and group =
information is consumed from the directory server, and all  new user data e=
ntries created using the Portal User Interface are stored in the portal dat=
abase. </para>
+    <para>If LDAP is operating in read-only mode, existing user and group =
information is consumed from the directory server, and all  new user data e=
ntries created using the Portal User Interface are stored in the portal dat=
abase. </para>
     <para>The only exception is that passwords updated through the user in=
terface will also be propagated into the appropriate LDAP entry.
             </para>
     <procedure id=3D"proc-LDAP-LDAP_read-only_Mode">


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