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Subject: [hibernate-commits] Hibernate SVN: r20665 -
 core/trunk/documentation/quickstart/src/main/docbook/en-US/content.
Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2010 09:44:04 -0400
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Author: adamw
Date: 2010-09-20 09:44:04 -0400 (Mon, 20 Sep 2010)
New Revision: 20665

Modified:
   core/trunk/documentation/quickstart/src/main/docbook/en-US/content/tutor=
ial_envers.xml
Log:
Minor corrections to the tutorial

Modified: core/trunk/documentation/quickstart/src/main/docbook/en-US/conten=
t/tutorial_envers.xml
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--- core/trunk/documentation/quickstart/src/main/docbook/en-US/content/tuto=
rial_envers.xml	2010-09-20 10:52:52 UTC (rev 20664)
+++ core/trunk/documentation/quickstart/src/main/docbook/en-US/content/tuto=
rial_envers.xml	2010-09-20 13:44:04 UTC (rev 20665)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
         <para>
             This file was discussed in the <phrase>JPA</phrase> tutorial, =
and is largely the same here.  The major
             difference is the set of properties defining <firstterm><phras=
e>listeners</phrase></firstterm>.
-            Essentially this enables envers to recieve notfications from H=
ibernate processing of certain
+            Essentially this enables Envers to recieve notfications from H=
ibernate processing of certain
             <firstterm><phrase>events</phrase></firstterm> such as an enti=
ty being saved or updated.
         </para>
     </section>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
         <title>Example code</title>
         <para>
             Again, this tutorial makes use of the <phrase>JPA</phrase> API=
s.  However, the code also makes a
-            revision to one of the entites and then uses the Envers API to=
 pull back the initial revision
+            change to one of the entites and then uses the Envers API to p=
ull back the initial revision (version)
             as well as the updated revision.
         </para>
         <example id=3D"hibernate-gsg-tutorial-envers-test-api">
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
             <interfacename>javax.persistence.EntityManager</interfacename>.
         </para>
         <para>
-            Then the <methodname>find</methodname> methid is used to retri=
eve specific revisions of the entity.  The
+            Then the <methodname>find</methodname> method is used to retri=
eve specific revisions of the entity.  The
             first call reads "find revision number 1 of Event with id 2". =
 The second call reads "find revision
             number 2 of Event with id 2".
         </para>


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