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Subject: [jbosstools-commits] JBoss Tools SVN: r5150 -
 trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules.
Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2007 09:54:23 -0500
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Author: dgeraskov
Date: 2007-11-29 09:54:23 -0500 (Thu, 29 Nov 2007)
New Revision: 5150

Modified:
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/crud_application_walkthrough.xml
Log:
http://jira.jboss.com/jira/browse/RHDS-312

Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/crud_application_walkthrough=
.xml
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=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
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--- trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/crud_application_walkthrough.xml	2=
007-11-29 14:30:02 UTC (rev 5149)
+++ trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/crud_application_walkthrough.xml	2=
007-11-29 14:54:23 UTC (rev 5150)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
             </mediaobject>
         </figure> =

         =

-        <para>Select a Server in the wizard <emphasis><property>Run on Ser=
ver </property></emphasis> and click <property>Finish</property></para> =

+        <para>Select a Server and click <property>Finish</property></para> =

            =

         <figure>
             <title>Select a Server</title>
@@ -68,11 +68,11 @@
             </mediaobject>
         </figure>  =

  			=

- 		<para>After the previous steps you can use CRUD application to select, =
delete or update date from <property>employee</property> database.</para>
+ 		<para>After that you can use CRUD application with <property>employee</=
property> database.</para>
  			=

         =

-        <para>You can use internal JBDS Web Browser or your external Web B=
rowser with the same link. (<emphasis>http://localhost:8080/crudapp/home.se=
am</emphasis>)</para>
-        <para>Click on the <emphasis><property>Employees List</property></=
emphasis> link and observe that data from DataBase <emphasis><property>empl=
oyee</property></emphasis> selected.</para>
+        <para>You can use internal JBDS Web Browser or your external Web B=
rowser with the same link (<ulink url=3D"http://localhost:8080/crudapp/home=
.seam">http://localhost:8080/crudapp/home.seam</ulink>). </para>
+        <para>Click on the <emphasis><property>Employees List</property></=
emphasis> link and observe that data from <emphasis><property>employee</pro=
perty></emphasis> database are displayed.</para>
         <figure>
             <title>Employees List</title>
             <mediaobject> =

@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
             </mediaobject>
         </figure>
         =

-        <para>Use <property>Employees search parameters</property> fields =
to filter selected list.</para>
+        <para>Use <property>Employees search parameters</property> fields =
to filter the selected list.</para>
         =

         <para> Press <property>Select</property> opposite one of employees=
.</para>
         <figure>
@@ -95,10 +95,8 @@
         </figure>
         =

         =

-        <para> Press <property>Edit</property> to Edit employees fields.</=
para>
-        <para> Enter <emphasis>Login</emphasis> and <emphasis>Password</em=
phasis> to login. (Use <emphasis>&quot;Crudapp-user&quot;/&quot;secret&quot=
;</emphasis> for example)</para>
-        <para> After this you will be loged in to the server and it will n=
ot ask you to enter login and password if you decide to carry through the s=
ame steps again.</para>
-        <para> Link <emphasis><property>Login</property></emphasis> in the=
 right top corner will be changed on label <emphasis>Welcome, crudapp-user<=
/emphasis> and link <emphasis><property>Logout</property></emphasis>.</para>
+        <para> Press <property>Edit</property> to edit employee fields.</p=
ara>
+        <para> Enter <emphasis><property>Login</property></emphasis> and <=
emphasis><property>Password</property></emphasis> to login. (Use <emphasis>=
&quot;crudapp-user&quot;/&quot;secret&quot;</emphasis> for example)</para>
         =

         <figure>
             <title>Login page</title>
@@ -116,9 +114,8 @@
                 </imageobject>
             </mediaobject>
         </figure>
-        <para> Insert opposite <emphasis><property>firstname</property></e=
mphasis> your name and press <property>Update</property>.</para>
-        <para> Record in DataBase will be updated.</para>
-        <para> See that field <emphasis><property>firstname</property></em=
phasis> also updated on the screen .</para>        =

+        <para> Fill in <emphasis><property>firstname</property></emphasis>=
 and press <property>Update</property>.</para>
+        <para> Database will be updated.</para>
      </section>   =

 </chapter>
 =



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