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Subject: [jbosstools-commits] JBoss Tools SVN: r29437 -
 trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US.
Date: Tue, 01 Mar 2011 22:19:37 -0500
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Author: mcaspers
Date: 2011-03-01 22:19:37 -0500 (Tue, 01 Mar 2011)
New Revision: 29437

Modified:
   trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml
   trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/Revision_History.xml
   trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/reference.xml
   trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/summary.xml
   trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/tasks.xml
Log:
General Documentation Updates

Modified: trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml
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--- trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2011-03-02 02:50:26 UTC (=
rev 29436)
+++ trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2011-03-02 03:19:37 UTC (=
rev 29437)
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 	<productname>JBoss Developer Studio</productname>
 	<productnumber>4.0</productnumber>
 	<edition>4.0.0</edition>
-	<pubsnumber>8</pubsnumber>
+	<pubsnumber>9</pubsnumber>
 	<abstract>
 		<para>The JBoss BPEL User Guide explains how to use the BPEL Tools to cr=
eate BPEL files quickly and with precision.</para>
 	</abstract>

Modified: trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/Revision_History.xml
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--- trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/Revision_History.xml	2011-03-02 02:50:2=
6 UTC (rev 29436)
+++ trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/Revision_History.xml	2011-03-02 03:19:3=
7 UTC (rev 29437)
@@ -6,7 +6,21 @@
 	<simpara>
 		<revhistory>
 			<revision>
-				<revnumber>1-0</revnumber>
+				<revnumber>0-2</revnumber>
+				<date>Wed Mar 02 2011</date>
+				<author>
+					<firstname>Matthew</firstname>
+					<surname>Casperson</surname>
+					<email>mcaspers(a)redhat.com</email>
+				</author>
+				<revdescription>
+					<simplelist>
+						<member>Screenshot updates and general editing</member>
+					</simplelist>
+				</revdescription>
+			</revision>
+			<revision>
+				<revnumber>0-1</revnumber>
 				<date>Tue Jan 18 2011</date>
 				<author>
 					<firstname>Matthew</firstname>

Modified: trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/reference.xml
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=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
--- trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/reference.xml	2011-03-02 02:50:26 UTC (=
rev 29436)
+++ trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/reference.xml	2011-03-02 03:19:37 UTC (=
rev 29437)
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
         <title>Wizards</title>
         <section>
             <title>New BPEL project Wizard</title>
-            <para>This wizard helps to create new BPEL project. It is avai=
lable by selecting <menuchoice><guimenuitem>File</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>=
New</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Other</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>BPEL project<=
/guimenuitem></menuchoice> in the menu bar.</para>
+            <para>This wizard is provided to create a new BPEL project. It=
 is available by selecting <menuchoice><guimenuitem>File</guimenuitem><guim=
enuitem>New</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Other</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>BPEL =
project</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.</para>
             <figure>
                 <title>New BPEL Project Wizard</title>
                 <mediaobject>
@@ -23,12 +23,12 @@
                     </imageobject>
                 </mediaobject>
             </figure>
-            <para>It consists of two pages:</para>
+            <para>The wizard consists of two pages:</para>
             <itemizedlist>
                 <listitem>
                 	<para>On the first page you can adjust the name of the pr=
oject and the directory where it will be created.</para>
                   <para>
-                  	If "<property>Use default</property>" option is checked=
 the output directory will be the workspace, otherwise the user should spec=
ify it by himself using <guibutton>Browse</guibutton> button.
+                  	If the <guilabel>Use default location</guilabel> option=
 is checked the output directory will be set to the workspace, otherwise a =
custom location can be specified by clicking the <guibutton>Browse</guibutt=
on> button.
                   </para>
                     <figure>
                         <title>New BPEL Project Wizard</title>
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
                     </figure>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                	<para>On the second page you can specify the name of the =
Content Folder.</para>                  =

+                	<para>On the second page you can specify the name of the =
<guilabel>Content Folder</guilabel>.</para>                  =

                     <figure>
                         <title>New BPEL Project Wizard</title>
                         <mediaobject>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
         </section>
         <section>
             <title>Apache ODE Deployment Descriptor Wizard</title>
-            <para>Using this wizard user can create ODE deployment descrip=
tor (<filename>deploy.xml</filename>) and place it in the temporary directo=
ry.It is available by selecting <menuchoice><guimenuitem>File</guimenuitem>=
<guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Other</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>=
Apache ODE Deployment Descriptor Wizard</guimenuitem></menuchoice> in the m=
enu bar.</para>
+            <para>This wizard can be used to create an ODE deployment desc=
riptor (<filename>deploy.xml</filename>) file and place it in the temporary=
 directory. It is available by selecting <menuchoice><guimenuitem>File</gui=
menuitem><guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Other</guimenuitem><gui=
menuitem>Apache ODE Deployment Descriptor Wizard</guimenuitem></menuchoice>=
.</para>
             <figure>
                 <title>New BPEL Project Wizard</title>
                 <mediaobject>
@@ -64,16 +64,16 @@
                 </mediaobject>
             </figure>
             <para>
-            	On the page you can adjust the name of the deployment descrip=
tor and the directory where it will be created.Note,that you should use <fi=
lename>/PROJECT_NAME/bpelContent</filename> directory as an output one.
+            		On this page you can adjust the name of the deployment descr=
iptor and the directory where it will be created. Note that you should use =
<filename>/PROJECT_NAME/bpelContent</filename> directory for the output.
             </para>
                                    =

         </section>
         <section>
             <title>New BPEL Process file Wizard</title>
-            <para>Using the <property>New BPEL Process file Wizard</proper=
ty> it is possible to create a BPEL process file and a WSDL file.
+            <para>Using the <guilabel>New BPEL Process file Wizard</guilab=
el> it is possible to create a BPEL process file and a WSDL file.
             The wizard includes several pages:</para>
             <itemizedlist>
-                <listitem><para>The first page has the following options t=
o set:</para>
+                <listitem><para>The first page includes the following opti=
ons:</para>
                     <table>
                         <title>New BPEL Process file Wizard. First Page Op=
tions.</title>   =

                         <tgroup cols=3D"3">
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
                     </figure>
                     =

                 </listitem>
-                <listitem><para>The second page has the following options =
to set:</para>
+                <listitem><para>The second page include the following opti=
ons:</para>
                     <table>
                         <title>New BPEL Process file Wizard. Second Page O=
ptions.</title>   =

                         <tgroup cols=3D"3">
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@
                 </listitem>
             </itemizedlist>
             <note>
-                <para>Process files that are used in the BPEL project must=
 be under the <property>bpelContent</property> folder. Only in this case th=
ese files can be deployed to JBoss server.
+                <para>Process files that are used in the BPEL project must=
 be under the <filename>bpelContent</filename> folder. This is necessary fo=
r the files to be deployed to a JBoss server.
                 </para>
             </note>
         </section>
@@ -204,9 +204,8 @@
         <title>Editors</title>
         <section>
             <title>Business Process Editor</title>
-            <para>Business Process Editor is intended to facilitate the pr=
ocess of changing and =

-                adding new logic to BPEL process file. You can open <empha=
sis>.bpel</emphasis> =

-                in this editor by right click the file in the project expl=
orer and selecting <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Open With...</guimenuitem><guim=
enuitem>Business Process Editor</guimenuitem></menuchoice>
+            <para>
+	            	The Business Process Editor is intended to facilitate the pr=
ocess of changing and adding new logic to a BPEL process file. You can open=
 <filename>.bpel</filename> files in this editor by right click the file in=
 the <guilabel>Project Explorer</guilabel> and selecting <menuchoice><guime=
nuitem>Open With...</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Business Process Editor</guim=
enuitem></menuchoice>.
             </para>
             <figure>
                 <title>Business Process Editor</title>
@@ -216,10 +215,10 @@
                     </imageobject>
                 </mediaobject>
             </figure>
-            <para>The editor consists of two tabs:<property>Design</proper=
ty> tab and <property>Source</property> tab.</para>
+            <para>The editor consists of two tabs: the <guilabel>Design</g=
uilabel> tab and the <guilabel>Source</guilabel> tab.</para>
        <section>
            <title>Design tab</title>
-           <para>Design tab is the main part of Business Process Editor.It=
 consists of 3 parts:</para>
+           <para>The <guilabel>Design</guilabel> tab is the main part of t=
he <guilabel>Business Process Editor</guilabel>. It consists of 3 parts:</p=
ara>
            <itemizedlist>
                <listitem><para>Visual Pane:</para>
                    <figure>
@@ -230,7 +229,7 @@
                            </imageobject>
                        </mediaobject>
                    </figure>
-                   <para>The Visual Pane graphically displays the order in=
 which the activities are executed.</para>
+                   <para>The Visual Pane provides a graphical representati=
on of the order in which the activities are executed.</para>
                </listitem>
                <listitem><para>Palette:</para>
                    <figure>
@@ -242,7 +241,7 @@
                        </mediaobject>
                    </figure>
                    <para>
-                   	The <property>Palette</property> represents different =
elements of the BPEL activities organized into functional categories. Using=
 it the developer can easily add new elements to the sequence activity. To =
do this, click the required element and then drag and drop it to the place =
on the Visual Pane where it should be added.
+                   	The <guilabel>Palette</guilabel> view represents the d=
ifferent BPEL activities elements organized into functional categories. Usi=
ng it the developer can easily add new elements to the sequence activity. T=
o do this, click the required element and then drag and drop it to the plac=
e on the Visual Pane.
                    </para>
                </listitem>
                <listitem><para>Behavior Components View:</para>
@@ -254,10 +253,9 @@
                            </imageobject>
                        </mediaobject>
                   </figure>
-                   <para>Execution behavior components are grouped into th=
e <property>
-                       Behavior Components View</property>.
-                       The view is also fully synchronized with Properties=
 view where you can customize all
-                       the properties of the component.</para>
+                   <para>
+                   	Execution behavior components are grouped into the <gu=
ilabel>Behavior Components</guilabel> view. This view is also fully synchro=
nized with <guilabel>Properties</guilabel> view where you can customize all=
 the properties of the component.
+                   </para>
                    <figure>
                        <title>Process Structure View of Business Process E=
ditor</title>
                        <mediaobject>
@@ -266,7 +264,7 @@
                            </imageobject>
                        </mediaobject>
                    </figure>                  =

-                   <para>To add an element to some component group click t=
he plus (<inlinemediaobject>
+                   <para>To add an element to a component group click the =
plus (<inlinemediaobject>
                        <imageobject>
                            <imagedata fileref=3D"images/reference/bpel_ref=
_10.png"/>
                        </imageobject>
@@ -279,7 +277,7 @@
        </section>
             <section>
                 <title>Source tab</title>
-                <para>Source tab can be used for editing BPEL process file=
 directly. It is also possible to validate the file structure.
+                <para>The <guilabel>Source</guilabel> tab can be used for =
directly editing BPEL process files. It is also possible to validate the fi=
le structure.
                  </para>
                 <figure>
                     <title>Validation error in Source tab</title>
@@ -289,7 +287,7 @@
                         </imageobject>
                     </mediaobject>
                 </figure>
-                <para>If the user wants to disable/unable validation he ca=
n do it by selecting <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Window</guimenuitem><guimenui=
tem>Preferences</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Validation</guimenuitem></menucho=
ice>.</para>
+                <para>Validation can be enabled or disabled by selecting <=
menuchoice><guimenuitem>Window</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Preferences</guime=
nuitem><guimenuitem>Validation</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.</para>
                 <figure>
                     <title>Validation configuration</title>
                     <mediaobject>
@@ -302,7 +300,7 @@
        </section>
       <section>
           <title>ODE Deployment Descriptor Editor</title>
-          <para>To deploy your process in ODE you need to create a simple =
deployment descriptor with basic information, using the <property>ODE Deplo=
yment Descriptor Editor</property> to facilitate the process of descriptor =
configuration. You can see how the descriptor file opened in the editor loo=
ks like in the picture below:
+          <para>To deploy your process in ODE you need to create a simple =
deployment descriptor with basic information, using the <property>ODE Deplo=
yment Descriptor Editor</property> to facilitate the process of descriptor =
configuration. You can see how the descriptor file looks when it is opened =
in the editor in the image below:
           </para>
           <figure>
               <title>ODE Deployment Descriptor Editor</title>

Modified: trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/summary.xml
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=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
--- trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/summary.xml	2011-03-02 02:50:26 UTC (re=
v 29436)
+++ trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/summary.xml	2011-03-02 03:19:37 UTC (re=
v 29437)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     <?dbhtml filename=3D"summary.html"?>
     <title>Summary</title>
     <para>
-    	This document highlights the capabilities of BPEL Tools, as well as p=
roviding the steps required to create and configure BPEL process and deploy=
ment descriptor files. If you have questions or suggestions concerned both =
the documentation and tools behavior, you are welcome to JBoss Tools Users =
forum. Please, use Jira to report bugs and requests on documentation.
+    		This document highlights the capabilities of BPEL Tools, as well as =
providing the steps required to create and configure BPEL process and deplo=
yment descriptor files. If you have questions or suggestions concerned both=
 the documentation and tools behavior please visit the JBoss Tools Users fo=
rum.
     </para>
     =

     <section>

Modified: trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/tasks.xml
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=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
--- trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/tasks.xml	2011-03-02 02:50:26 UTC (rev =
29436)
+++ trunk/bpel/docs/reference/en-US/tasks.xml	2011-03-02 03:19:37 UTC (rev =
29437)
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@
 			<itemizedlist>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						Create the deploy.xml by selecting <menuchoice><guimenuitem>New</gui=
menuitem><guimenuitem>Other...</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>BPEL 2.0</guimenui=
tem><guimenuitem>Apache ODE Deployment Descriptor</guimenuitem></menuchoice=
>. Click the <guibutton>Next</guibutton> button. =

+						Create the <filename>deploy.xml</filename> file by selecting <menuch=
oice><guimenuitem>File</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem><guimenui=
tem>Other...</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>BPEL 2.0</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>A=
pache ODE Deployment Descriptor</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. Click the <guib=
utton>Next</guibutton> button. =

           </para>
 					<figure>
 						<title>New BPEL Deploy file</title>
@@ -424,10 +424,10 @@
 				<listitem>
 					<para>On the next wizard page you should enter the following informat=
ion:</para>
 					<para>
-						<emphasis><property>BPEL Project</property> </emphasis>: Click the <=
guibutton>Browse...</guibutton> button to select the BPEL project in your w=
orkspace which you want to deploy to the runtime. Please note, that you sho=
uld select the <filename>bpelContent</filename> folder in your new BPEL pro=
ject as a value of <property>BPEL Project</property> field because the <fil=
ename>deploy.xml</filename> should be created in this place.
+						<emphasis><property>BPEL Project</property> </emphasis>: Click the <=
guibutton>Browse...</guibutton> button to select the BPEL project in your w=
orkspace where you want to deploy to the runtime. Please note that you shou=
ld select the <filename>bpelContent</filename> folder in your new BPEL proj=
ect for the <property>BPEL Project</property> field because this is the cor=
rect location for the <filename>deploy.xml</filename> file.
 					</para>
 					<para>
-						<emphasis><property>File name</property></emphasis>: The default val=
ue is <filename>deploy.xml</filename>. Please, don't change it.
+						<emphasis><property>File name</property></emphasis>: The default val=
ue is <filename>deploy.xml</filename>. This should not be changed.
 					</para>
 					<para>Click on the <guibutton>Finish</guibutton> button to close the =
wizard and a new <filename>deploy.xml</filename> file will be created.</par=
a>
 					<figure>
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						Double-click the <filename>deploy.xml</filename> file to open it in =
ODE Descriptor Deployment Editor. In the <property>Inbound Interfaces</prop=
erty> section, click the <property>Associated Port</property> column and se=
lect <property>HelloWorldProcessPort</property> in the dropdown box.The <pr=
operty>Related Service</property> and <property>Binding Used</property> col=
umns should  be automatically filled in. Save the <filename>deploy.xml</fil=
ename>.
+						Double-click the <filename>deploy.xml</filename> file to open it in =
<guilabel>ODE Descriptor Deployment Editor</guilabel>. In the <guilabel>Inb=
ound Interfaces</guilabel> section, click the <guilabel>Associated Port</gu=
ilabel> column and select <guilabel>HelloWorldProcessPort</guilabel> in the=
 dropdown box.The <guilabel>Related Service</guilabel> and <guilabel>Bindin=
g Used</guilabel> columns should  be automatically filled in. Save the chan=
ges to the <filename>deploy.xml</filename> file.
           </para>
 					<figure>
 						<title>deploy.xml file editor</title>
@@ -457,17 +457,17 @@
 		<section id=3D"createruntime">
 			<title>Creating JBoss BPEL Server</title>
 			<para>
-				Suppose you have installed the <property>JBoss BPEL Runtime-RiftSaw</p=
roperty><!-- as it was described in <xref linkend=3D"installRuntime"/>-->, =
now you can create a server for JBoss BPEL runtime.
+				Once you have installed the <property>JBoss BPEL Runtime-RiftSaw</prop=
erty><!-- as it was described in <xref linkend=3D"installRuntime"/>-->, you=
 can create a server for JBoss BPEL runtime.
 			</para>
 			<itemizedlist>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						Open the <property>Servers</property> view by selecting <menuchoice>=
<guimenuitem>Windows</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Show View</guimenuitem><guim=
enuitem>Other...</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Server</guimenuitem><guimenuitem=
>Servers</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+						Open the <guilabel>Servers</guilabel> view by selecting <menuchoice>=
<guimenuitem>Windows</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Show View</guimenuitem><guim=
enuitem>Other...</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Server</guimenuitem><guimenuitem=
>Servers</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
           </para>
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						Right-click the Servers view and select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>New=
</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Server</guimenuitem></menuchoice> to open the Ne=
w Server Wizard: =

+						Right-click the <guilabel>Servers</guilabel> view and select <menuch=
oice><guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Server</guimenuitem></menuc=
hoice> to open the <guilabel>New Server</guilabel> wizard: =

           </para>
 					<figure>
 						<title>New Server Wizard</title>
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@
 					</figure>
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
-					<para>Select <property>JBoss AS 5.1</property> as a server type. </pa=
ra>
+					<para>Select <guilabel>JBoss AS 5.1</guilabel> as a server type. </pa=
ra>
 					<note>
 						<para>Please note, that only JBoss As 5.1 or higher version supports=
 BPEL.</para>
 					</note>
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@
 				<listitem>
 =

 					<para>
-						Click the <guibutton>Next</guibutton> button. On the next page, you =
should input your <emphasis><property>JBoss As</property> </emphasis> locat=
ion. Then click the <guibutton>Next</guibutton> button and you will get the=
 page like this: =

+						Click the <guibutton>Next</guibutton> button. On the next page, you =
should input your <productname>JBoss As</productname> location. Then click =
the <guibutton>Next</guibutton> button and you will get the page like this: =

 					</para>
 					<figure>
 						<title>Add resource to the server</title>
@@ -500,7 +500,7 @@
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						Select <property>HelloWorld</property>, then click the <guibutton>Ad=
d</guibutton> button to add the project to the server. Then click on the <g=
uibutton>Finish</guibutton> button.
+						Select <guilabel>HelloWorld</guilabel>, then click the <guibutton>Ad=
d</guibutton> button to add the project to the server. Finally, click the <=
guibutton>Finish</guibutton> button.
 					</para>
 					<para>Start the server by right-clicking on the server and selecting =
the <guilabel>Start</guilabel> item. </para>
 =

@@ -512,10 +512,10 @@
 							</imageobject>
 						</mediaobject>
 					</figure>
-					<para>If some aspects of server creation is not clear, please, read  =
<ulink url=3D"http://download.jboss.org/jbosstools/nightly-docs/en/as/html_=
single/index.html">JBoss Server Manager Reference Guide</ulink> for more de=
tails.</para>
+					<para>Read the <ulink url=3D"http://download.jboss.org/jbosstools/nig=
htly-docs/en/as/html_single/index.html">JBoss Server Manager Reference Guid=
e</ulink> for more detail on this process.</para>
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
-					<para>You can enter the link <ulink url=3D"http://localhost:8080/bpel=
-console/app.html">http://localhost:8080/bpel-console/app.html</ulink> to t=
he browser to get the deployed processes.</para>
+					<para>You can enter the link <ulink url=3D"http://localhost:8080/bpel=
-console/app.html">http://localhost:8080/bpel-console/app.html</ulink> in y=
our web browser to access the deployed processes.</para>
 					<figure>
 						<title>The BPEL console</title>
 						<mediaobject>
@@ -526,8 +526,9 @@
 					</figure>
 				</listitem>
 			</itemizedlist>
-			<para>If there's anything we didn't cover or you can't figure out, plea=
se feel free to visit our <ulink url=3D"http://www.jboss.com/index.html?mod=
ule=3Dbb&amp;op=3Dviewforum&amp;f=3D201">JBoss Tools Users Forum</ulink> to=
 ask questions.
-                There we are also waiting for your suggestions and comment=
s.</para>
+			<para>
+				Please visit the <ulink url=3D"http://www.jboss.com/index.html?module=
=3Dbb&amp;op=3Dviewforum&amp;f=3D201">JBoss Tools Users Forum</ulink> for m=
ore information and assistance.
+			</para>
 		</section>
 	</section>
 </chapter>


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