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 docs/branches/JBoss_Portal_Branch_2_6/referenceGuide/en/modules.
Date: Thu, 07 Feb 2008 03:15:41 -0500
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Author: mmcallis
Date: 2008-02-07 03:15:41 -0500 (Thu, 07 Feb 2008)
New Revision: 9829

Modified:
   docs/branches/JBoss_Portal_Branch_2_6/referenceGuide/en/modules/tutorial=
s.xml
Log:
minor spelling/sentance corrections 5.1. JSR-168 Overview
to 5.2. Tutorials


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utorials.xml
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ls.xml	2008-02-07 07:36:36 UTC (rev 9828)
+++ docs/branches/JBoss_Portal_Branch_2_6/referenceGuide/en/modules/tutoria=
ls.xml	2008-02-07 08:15:41 UTC (rev 9829)
@@ -19,10 +19,10 @@
    <title>Portlet Primer</title>
    <sect1 id=3D"portlet_primer">
       <title>JSR-168 Overview</title>
-      <para>The JSR-168 specification aims at defining portlets that can b=
e used by any JSR-168 portlet container, also known as portals. There are d=
ifferent portals with commercial and non-commercial licenses. This chapter =
gives a brief overview of the <ulink url=3D"http://www.jcp.org/en/jsr/detai=
l?id=3D168">JSR-168 Portlet Specification</ulink>. Portlet developers are s=
trongly encouraged to read the <ulink url=3D"http://www.jcp.org/en/jsr/deta=
il?id=3D168">JSR-168 Portlet Specification</ulink>.
+      <para>The JSR-168 Portlet Specification aims at defining portlets th=
at can be used by any JSR-168 portlet container, also known as a portal. Th=
ere are different portals with commercial and non-commercial licenses. This=
 chapter gives a brief overview of the <ulink url=3D"http://www.jcp.org/en/=
jsr/detail?id=3D168">JSR-168 Portlet Specification</ulink>. Portlet develop=
ers are strongly encouraged to read the <ulink url=3D"http://www.jcp.org/en=
/jsr/detail?id=3D168">JSR-168 Portlet Specification</ulink>.
       </para>
       <para>
-	      JBoss portal is fully JSR-168 compliant, which means any JSR-168 po=
rtlet will behave as it should inside the portal.
+	      JBoss Portal is fully JSR-168 compliant, which means any JSR-168 po=
rtlet will behave as it should inside the portal.
       </para>
       <sect2>
          <title>Portal Pages</title>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
          <title>Window States</title>
          <para>
             Window states are an indicator of how much page real-estate a =
portlet should consume on any given page.
-	    The three states defined by the JSR-168 specification:
+	    The three states defined by the JSR-168 specification are:
          </para>
 	 <para>
             <itemizedlist>
@@ -91,18 +91,17 @@
       </sect2>
       <sect2>
          <title>Section Status</title>
-         This overview of the portlet specification, is a work in progress=
. Check back for more in-depth analsis of the
-         specification, but please read on for real-world cases of how to =
leverage the specification.
+	 <para>
+		 This overview of the JSR-168 Portlet Specification is a work in progres=
s. Check back for more in-depth analsis of the specification. The sections =
following here after contain real-world cases for how to leverage the speci=
fication.
+	</para>
       </sect2>
    </sect1>
    <sect1 id=3D"tutorials_tutorials">
       <title>Tutorials</title>
       <para>
          The tutorials contained in this chapter are targetted toward port=
let developers. Although they are a good
-         starting and reference point, we do heavily recommend that portle=
t developers read and understand the
-         <ulink url=3D"http://www.jcp.org/en/jsr/detail?id=3D168">Portlet =
Specification (JSR-168)</ulink>. We also recommend
-         using our <ulink url=3D"http://jboss.org/index.html?module=3Dbb&a=
mp;op=3Dviewforum&amp;f=3D215">JBoss Portal User
-         Forums</ulink> for user-to-user help, when needed.
+         starting and reference point, it is heavily recommend that portle=
t developers read and understand the
+	 <ulink url=3D"http://www.jcp.org/en/jsr/detail?id=3D168">JSR-168 Portlet=
 Specification</ulink>. Use the <ulink url=3D"http://jboss.org/index.html?m=
odule=3Dbb&amp;op=3Dviewforum&amp;f=3D215">JBoss Portal User Forums</ulink>=
 for user-to-user help.
       </para>
       <!--<sect2 id=3D"build_instructions">
          <title>


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