[teiid-designer-issues] [JBoss JIRA] Commented: (TEIIDDES-940) Update Documentation

[ https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TEIIDDES-940?page=com.atlassian.jira.plug... ] Barry LaFond commented on TEIIDDES-940: --------------------------------------- FROM DAN : 5/31/2011 Chapter 10 Section 10.2 Para 2: Change linked text to "SQL Results" Section 10.2 Para 2 Last sentence: Reword or add new sentence identifying the Model Explorer (link), diagram editor (link), and transformation editor (link). Section 10.2 Para 4: Change last sentence to (See "Teiid View") Section 10.2: Maybe add a subsection to show the dialog that shows the user the "preview cannot be run at this time" dialog. (Can't remember the exact words.) Sections 10.2.1-10.2.4 Step 1 and Step 2: Delete "Section 4.1, " from linked text Sections 10.2.1 Step 3 and Sections 10.2.2-10.2.4 Step 4: Change linked text to "SQL Results" Sections 10.2.3 and 10.2.4: If they indeed use the same exact dialog, maybe combine these 2 sections. Would only have to change the Step 1 wording a bit to take into account the selecting of either relational procedure or a web service operation. Section 10.3.1 Second last paragraph, first sentence: change first occurrence of "and" to "an" Section 10.3.1 Last sentence: Reword to add " … now be shown in the Teiid View (link) in the Data Sources folder …" Section 10.3.2 first sentence: Change to a link "Teiid View" (note capital V) Section 10.3.3 Second paragraph, last sentence: Change "above" to "of the previous section" or maybe "of 10.3.2" Section 10.3.4 Step 8: "Result1 tab" is referenced but does not appear in figure "10.18" Chapter 11 Ch 11 Intro section, first sentence: Delete 2nd occurrence of "Search menu." Ch 11 Intro section: Change 2 occurrences of "Section 4.8, “Search Results View” (link) view" to "Search Results View" (link) Ch 11 Intro section: Would be nice if "Transformations, Metadata, and Find Model Object bullets had links to their associated sub-sections. Ch 11 Intro section: Delete last sentence of each of the "Transformations…", "Metadata…", "Find Model Object" bullets. Search results should be talked about in the appropriate detail section. Ch 11 Intro section: Maybe order bullets the same as the corresponding detail sections Section 11.1 Step 1: move the "or select the same action …" up to the sentence above Figure 11.2. Need to get rid of current ending period then. Figure 11.2 should be used for Figure 11.1 and Figure 11.2 should just show the toolbar with the search icon. Section 11.1 Step 1: "tool-bar" should be "toolbar" Section 11.1 Step 3: Delete second occurrence of "the" Section 11.3 First sentence: Delete "string values present in" Section 11.3 Step 1: Reword to "On the main menu, Select Search …" Section 11.3 Step 3: Change "occurrances" to "occurrences" Section 11.4 Step 3: Link should read "Search Results View" Chapter 12 Section 12.1 Intro section bullets is not consistent with its use of bold font. Bullets with bold font are missing the "-" (dash) Section 12.1 Intro section: need to add new preference about creating data source Section 12.1 Intro section, second bullet, first sentence: Reword after "-" to "If a mode editor is opened and the Teiid Designer perspective …" Section 12.1 Intro section, last bullet: Maybe add that cleanup also occurs when models and model projects are deleted. Also maybe add a warning that shutdown may take a bit longer when set. Section 12.1 Intro section: maybe reorder bullets to match the order of the pref page (diagram prefs are like that) Section 12.1.2 Last sentence: Delete space before period. General General: Change "Teiid Designer main menu" and "Teiid Designer toolbar" references to "main menu" and "toolbar" General: pics look like some are Windows and some are Linux General: Delete section references in links -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira