[hibernate-commits] Hibernate SVN: r15660 - search/trunk/doc/reference/en.

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Author: hardy.ferentschik
Date: 2008-12-04 05:17:39 -0500 (Thu, 04 Dec 2008)
New Revision: 15660

Modified:
   search/trunk/doc/reference/en/master.xml
Log:
HSEARCH-303 - preface changes

Modified: search/trunk/doc/reference/en/master.xml
===================================================================
--- search/trunk/doc/reference/en/master.xml	2008-12-04 09:55:05 UTC (rev 15659)
+++ search/trunk/doc/reference/en/master.xml	2008-12-04 10:17:39 UTC (rev 15660)
@@ -53,17 +53,17 @@
 
     <para>Full text search engines like Apache Lucene are very powerful
     technologies to add efficient free text search capabilities to
-    applications. However, they suffer several mismatches when dealing with
-    object domain models. Amongst other things indexes have to be kept up to
+    applications. However, Lucene suffers several mismatches when dealing with
+    object domain model. Amongst other things indexes have to be kept up to
     date and mismatches between index structure and domain model as well as
     query mismatches have to be avoided.</para>
 
-    <para>Hibernate Search indexes your domain model with the help of a few
-    annotations, takes care of database/index synchronization and brings back
-    regular managed objects from free text queries. To achieve this Hibernate
-    Search is combining the power of <ulink
-    url="http://www.hibernate.org">Hibernate</ulink> and <ulink
-    url="http://lucene.apache.org">Apache Lucene</ulink>.</para>
+    <para>Hibernate Search addresses these shortcomings - it indexes your
+    domain model with the help of a few annotations, takes care of
+    database/index synchronization and brings back regular managed objects
+    from free text queries. To achieve this Hibernate Search is combining the
+    power of <ulink url="http://www.hibernate.org">Hibernate</ulink> and
+    <ulink url="http://lucene.apache.org">Apache Lucene</ulink>.</para>
   </preface>
 
   <xi:include href="modules/getting-started.xml"