[jboss-cvs] JBoss Messaging SVN: r4338 - trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules.

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Thu May 29 09:09:13 EDT 2008


Author: jmesnil
Date: 2008-05-29 09:09:13 -0400 (Thu, 29 May 2008)
New Revision: 4338

Modified:
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/about.xml
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/installation.xml
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/introduction.xml
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/runningexamples.xml
Log:
typos and cosmetic changes

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/about.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/about.xml	2008-05-29 12:34:03 UTC (rev 4337)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/about.xml	2008-05-29 13:09:13 UTC (rev 4338)
@@ -1,8 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <chapter id="about">
    <title>About JBoss Messaging 2.0.0</title>
-   <para>JBoss Messaging 2 is the next level of messaging system being developed by JBoss, designed to attend very large demanding system and so we really believe JBoss Messaging 2 will be the most performatic 
-          Messaging System written in Java available on the market.</para>
+   <para>JBoss Messaging 2 is the next level of messaging system being developed by JBoss,
+    designed to attend very large demanding system and so we really believe JBoss 
+    Messaging 2 will be the most efficient Messaging System written in Java available
+    on the market.</para>
    <para>JBoss Messaging 1.4 has been the default implementation on JBoss Service Integration Platform and JBoss 5 for some time already. </para>
    <para>JBoss Messaging is an integral part of Red Hat's strategy for
    messaging.</para>

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/installation.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/installation.xml	2008-05-29 12:34:03 UTC (rev 4337)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/installation.xml	2008-05-29 13:09:13 UTC (rev 4338)
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@
 
    <section id="installation.jboss">
       <title>Installing JBoss Messaging in JBoss AS 5</title>
-      <para>At this point JBoss Messaging 2 Alpha is a technology preview and we only support the standalone or embedded runs.</para>
+      <para>At this point JBoss Messaging 2 Alpha is a technology preview and can only be run in standalone or embedded in your systems.</para>
    </section>
 
 </chapter>
\ No newline at end of file

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/introduction.xml	2008-05-29 12:34:03 UTC (rev 4337)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/introduction.xml	2008-05-29 13:09:13 UTC (rev 4338)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <chapter id="introduction">
    <title>Introduction</title>
 
-   <para>JBoss Messaging provides an open source and standards-based messaging
+   <para>JBoss Messaging provides an open source and standard-based messaging
    platform that brings enterprise-class messaging to the mass market.</para>
 
    <para>JBoss Messaging implements a high performance, robust messaging core
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@
    clustering implementation.</para>
 -->
    <para>JBoss Messaging includes a JMS front-end to deliver messaging in a
-   standards-based format as well as being designed to be able to support
+   standard-based format as well as being designed to be able to support
    other messaging protocols in the future.</para>
 
 
-   <para>Currently JBM 2.0 is only available standalone or embedded, The current JBoss AS 5 release contains JBM 1.4.2.</para>
+   <para>Currently JBM 2.0 is only available standalone or embedded, the current JBoss AS 5 release contains JBM 1.4.2.</para>
 
 
   <!-- <section id="support">
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
       <itemizedlist>
          <listitem>
             <para>Journal based persistence.</para>
-            <para>An append only file system where messages and transactions are stored at a high performance rate. We don't even need an external database for that.</para>
+            <para>An append-only file system where messages and transactions are stored at a high performance rate. An external database is no longer required.</para>
          </listitem>
 
          <listitem>
@@ -59,13 +59,13 @@
 
          <listitem>
             <para>Asynchronous IO (Linux only at the moment)</para>
-            <para>Instead of syncing the disk and waiting slow IO operations to complete during transactions, we can submit the writes directly on the kernel and get a notification when it is complete. 
-                  With this design we can support very high transaction rates even on very short transactions containing just few messages or acknowledgements. </para>
+            <para>Instead of syncing the disk and waiting for slow IO operations to complete during transactions, the writes are submitted directly to the kernel and a notification is sent back when it is complete. 
+                  With this design a very high transaction rate is supported even on very short transactions containing just few messages or acknowledgements.</para>
          </listitem>
 
          <listitem>
             <para>Standalone and embedded versions.</para>
-            <para>You can embed JBoss Messaging at your own system without the requirement of any servers at all. Just instantiate few POJOS and you have a Messaging System running.</para>
+            <para>JBoss Messaging can be embedded in your own system without the requirement of any servers at all. Just instantiate a few POJOS (Plain Old Java Objects) and you have a Messaging System running.</para>
          </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -128,11 +128,13 @@
             MS SQL Server, PostgreSQL and MySQL</para>
          </listitem>  -->
 
+         <!-- not available for JB2 alpha
          <listitem>
             <para>HTTP transport to allow use through firewalls that only
             allow HTTP traffic</para>
          </listitem>
-
+         -->
+         
          <listitem>
             <para>SSL transport</para>
          </listitem>

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/runningexamples.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/runningexamples.xml	2008-05-29 12:34:03 UTC (rev 4337)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/modules/runningexamples.xml	2008-05-29 13:09:13 UTC (rev 4338)
@@ -2,10 +2,12 @@
 <chapter id="examples">
    <title>Running the Examples</title>
 
-   <para>In the directory <literal>examples</literal>, you will find 2 sets of examples. A set of pure JMS examples
-      and also a set of non JMS examples that demonstrate how to use the JBoss Messaging core API
-   </para>
-   <para>It is highly recommended that you familiarise yourself with the
+   <para>In the directory <literal>examples</literal>, you will find 2 sets of examples:</para>
+   <itemizedlist>
+     <listitem>a set of JMS examples</listitem>
+     <listitem>a set of non-JMS examples that demonstrate how to use the JBoss Messaging core API</listitem>
+   </itemizedlist>
+   <para>It is highly recommended that you familiarize yourself with the
       examples.
    </para>
    <para>Make sure you start JBoss Messaging before running the
@@ -77,7 +79,7 @@
                start, you will see <literal>READY!!!</literal> when the listener has started. The number of messages,
                delivery mode can be configured as follows:
                <programlisting>
-      ant -Dmessage.count=20000 -Ddelivery.mode=PERSISTENT -Dsample.period=1 perfSender
+      ant -Dmessage.count=20000 -Ddelivery.mode=PERSISTENT perfSender
                </programlisting>
                <itemizedlist>
                   <listitem>




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