[jboss-cvs] JBoss Messaging SVN: r7162 - trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en.

jboss-cvs-commits at lists.jboss.org jboss-cvs-commits at lists.jboss.org
Tue Jun 2 10:16:50 EDT 2009


Author: jmesnil
Date: 2009-06-02 10:16:50 -0400 (Tue, 02 Jun 2009)
New Revision: 7162

Modified:
   trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/about.xml
   trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/examples.xml
   trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/installation.xml
   trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/running.xml
Log:
typos

Modified: trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/about.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/about.xml	2009-06-02 14:15:49 UTC (rev 7161)
+++ trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/about.xml	2009-06-02 14:16:50 UTC (rev 7162)
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <chapter id="about">
    <title>About JBoss Messaging</title>
-    <para>The goal of JBoss Messaging is simple and uncompromising; to bring unrivalled levels of
-        performance and reliability to messaging, and to be the fastest, best featured and most
+    <para>The goal of JBoss Messaging is simple and uncompromising: to bring unrivaled levels of
+        performance and reliability to messaging, and to be the fastest, best featured, and most
         scalable multi-protocol messaging system.</para>
     <para>Why use JBoss Messaging? Here are a few of the reasons:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -24,11 +24,11 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
             <para>Elegant POJO based design with minimal third party dependencies. Run JBoss
-                Messaging stand-alone, run it in integrated in your favourite JEE application
-                server, or run it embedded inside your own product.</para>
+                Messaging stand-alone, run it in integrated in your favourite Java EE Application
+                Server or IoC container, or run it embedded inside your own product.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-            <para>Seamless high availabilty. We provide server replication and completely
+            <para>Seamless high availability. We provide server replication and completely
                 transparent client failover so you don't have to worry about coding your client
                 specially for an HA environment.</para>
         </listitem>

Modified: trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/examples.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/examples.xml	2009-06-02 14:15:49 UTC (rev 7161)
+++ trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/examples.xml	2009-06-02 14:16:50 UTC (rev 7162)
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
             messages.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-         <para>Java EE Examples - these demonstrate app server integration, e.g. MDBs, EJBs,
-            Servlets etc</para>
+         <para>Java EE Examples - these demonstrate application server integration, e.g. MDBs, EJBs,
+            Servlets, etc.</para>
       </listitem>
    </itemizedlist>
    <para>All the examples are run using ant. You will need ant installed on your system and the ant
@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@
             <para>This contains the source code for the example</para>
          </listitem>
          <listitem>
-            <para><literal>server0</literal> config directory</para>
+            <para><literal>server0</literal> configuration directory</para>
             <para>This contains the configuration files needed to run the server for the example.
-               There may be multiple config directories <literal>server0</literal>, <literal
+               There may be multiple configuration directories <literal>server0</literal>, <literal
                   >server1</literal> etc for clustered examples etc.</para>
          </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-      <para>Each example will start one or more standalone servers and stop them after the example
+      <para>Each example will start one or more stand-alone servers and stop them after the example
          has completed.</para>
       <para>As a quick start we'll run the queue example. For all other examples refer to the main
          user manual.</para>

Modified: trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/installation.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/installation.xml	2009-06-02 14:15:49 UTC (rev 7161)
+++ trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/installation.xml	2009-06-02 14:16:50 UTC (rev 7162)
@@ -5,14 +5,14 @@
    <section id="installation.prerequisites">
       <title>Prerequisites</title>
       <note>
-         <para>JBoss Messaging only runs on Java 5 or later. We highly recommend you use Java
+         <para>JBoss Messaging only runs on Java 5 or later. We highly recommend to use Java
             6.</para>
       </note>
       <para>By default, JBoss Messaging server is run with 1GB of memory. If your computer has less
          memory, modify the value in <literal>bin/run.sh</literal> accordingly.</para>
       <para>For persistence, JBoss Messaging uses its own fast journal file, which you can configure
-         to use libaio (which is the defualt if Linux) or Java NIO. In order to use the libaio
-         module on linux, it's required to install libaio.</para>
+         to use libaio (which is the default when running on Linux) or Java NIO. In order to use the libaio
+         module on Linux, it's required to install libaio.</para>
       <para>You can install libaio using the following steps:</para>
       <para>Using yum, (e.g. on Fedora or Red Hat Enterprise Linux):</para>
       <programlisting>sudo yum install libaio</programlisting>
@@ -34,7 +34,6 @@
          |-- docs
          | |-- api
          | |-- quickstart-guide
-         | |-- migration-guide
          | `-- user-manual
          |-- examples
          | |-- core
@@ -51,7 +50,7 @@
          </listitem>
          <listitem>
             <para><literal>config</literal> -- configuration files needed to configure JBoss
-               Messaging. This contains configurations to run JBoss Messaging either in standalone
+               Messaging. This contains configurations to run JBoss Messaging either in stand-alone
                or inside JBoss AS 5. Please refer to the reference guide for details on
                configuration. </para>
          </listitem>

Modified: trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/running.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/running.xml	2009-06-02 14:15:49 UTC (rev 7161)
+++ trunk/docs/quickstart-guide/en/running.xml	2009-06-02 14:16:50 UTC (rev 7162)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
    <title>Starting The Server</title>
    <section id="running.standalone">
       <title>Standalone JBoss Messaging</title>
-      <para>To run a standalone server, open up a shell or command prompt and navigate into the
+      <para>To run a stand-alone server, open up a shell or command prompt and navigate into the
             <literal>bin</literal> directory. Then execute <literal>./run.sh</literal> (or <literal
             >run.bat</literal> on Windows) and you should see the following output </para>
       <programlisting>




More information about the jboss-cvs-commits mailing list