[jboss-cvs] JBossAS SVN: r101053 - projects/docs/enterprise/EWP_5.0/Getting_Started_Guide/en-US.

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Author: laubai
Date: 2010-02-16 19:27:16 -0500 (Tue, 16 Feb 2010)
New Revision: 101053

Modified:
   projects/docs/enterprise/EWP_5.0/Getting_Started_Guide/en-US/Preface.xml
Log:
Added new paragraphs for JBPAPP-3493.

Modified: projects/docs/enterprise/EWP_5.0/Getting_Started_Guide/en-US/Preface.xml
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--- projects/docs/enterprise/EWP_5.0/Getting_Started_Guide/en-US/Preface.xml	2010-02-16 22:18:04 UTC (rev 101052)
+++ projects/docs/enterprise/EWP_5.0/Getting_Started_Guide/en-US/Preface.xml	2010-02-17 00:27:16 UTC (rev 101053)
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@
 <preface id="Book-Preface">
 	<title>Introduction</title>
 	<para>
-		JBoss Enterprise Web Platform is the open source implementation of the Java EE suite of services. It comprises a set of offerings for enterprise customers who are looking for preconfigured profiles of JBoss Enterprise Middleware components that have been tested and certified together to provide an integrated experience. Its easy-to-use server architecture and high flexibility makes JBoss the ideal choice for users just starting out with J2EE, as well as senior architects looking for a customizable middleware platform.
+JBoss Enterprise Web Platform is the open source implementation of a subset of the Java EE 5 suite of services; it's therefore a subset of JBoss Enterprise Application Platform. It is a close approximation to the recently approved Java EE 6 Web Profile. The Enterprise Web Platform includes the services commonly use to develop large scale, business critical web applications. The components have been tested and certified together to provide an integrated experience and the flexible yet easy-to-use server architecture makes JBoss the ideal choice for users just starting out with Enterprise Java, as well as more experienced users looking for a customizable middleware platform.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+Because it is Java-based, JBoss Enterprise Web Platform is cross-platform, easy to install and use on any operating system that supports Java. The readily available source code is a powerful learning tool to debug the server and understand it. It also gives you the flexibility to create customized versions for your personal or business use.
 	</para>
-	<para>
-		Because it is Java-based, JBoss Web Platform is cross-platform, easy to install and use on any operating system that supports Java. The readily available source code is a powerful learning tool to debug the server and understand it. It also gives you the flexibility to create customized versions for your personal or business use.
-	</para>
 <!--	<para>
 		Installing JBoss Enterprise Web Platform is simple and easy. You can have it installed and running in no time. This guide will teach you to install and get started with the JBoss Application Server.</para> -->