[jbosstools-commits] JBoss Tools SVN: r35935 - trunk/documentation/whatsnew/openshift.

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Author: adietish
Date: 2011-10-24 09:33:54 -0400 (Mon, 24 Oct 2011)
New Revision: 35935

Modified:
   trunk/documentation/whatsnew/openshift/openshift-news-0.1.0.M4.html
Log:
[JBIDE-10011] creating openshift n&n

Modified: trunk/documentation/whatsnew/openshift/openshift-news-0.1.0.M4.html
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--- trunk/documentation/whatsnew/openshift/openshift-news-0.1.0.M4.html	2011-10-24 13:19:09 UTC (rev 35934)
+++ trunk/documentation/whatsnew/openshift/openshift-news-0.1.0.M4.html	2011-10-24 13:33:54 UTC (rev 35935)
@@ -38,22 +38,20 @@
 				We developed a wizard that allows you to create an application on OpenShift Express and import it to your Eclipse workspace. 
 				The wizard holds all operations involved in creating a new application on OpenShift Express.
 				<p></p><img src="images/new-openshift-express-wizard.png" alt="new openshift express application"/></p> 
-				A frist step would require you to supply your credentials. A link would open the signup page if you have no account on 
-				OpenShift Express yet.
-				<p></p><img src="images/credentials.png" alt="credentials"/></p> 
+				the first page requires you to privide your OpenShift Express credentials. If you have no account yet, you may get to the signup page by clicking the link on  the top of this page.<p></p><img src="images/credentials.png" alt="credentials"/></p> 
 				You may eventually have to create a domain first.
 				<p></p><img src="images/domain.png" alt="domain"/></p>
-				The wizard allows you to create a new application.  
+				Once you have a domain, the wizard allows you  to create a new application.  
 				<p></p><img src="images/new-application.png" alt="new application"/></p>
-				It then lists your application.
+				And then lists all your applications.
 				<p></p><img src="images/applications.png" alt="applications"/></p>
 				A dialog lists the details for your new application.  
 				<p></p><img src="images/application-info.png" alt="application info"/></p>
 				The last step involved determines to what local location the git repository is cloned to. 
-				You may also tell our tooling to create a server adapter that will allow you to publish changes to the
+				You may also instruct the tooling to create an  Eclipse WTP server adapter for your application. It will  allow you to publish changes to the
 				OpenShift Express PaaS.
 				<p></p><img src="images/import-project.png" alt="import project"/></p>
-				The wizard will clone the repo...
+				The wizard will then clone the repo...
 				<p></p><img src="images/git-repository.png" alt="git repository"/></p>
 				...import the OpenShift Express application to your workspace...
 				<p></p><img src="images/imported-project.png" alt="imported project"/></p>