[jbosstools-commits] JBoss Tools SVN: r41732 - in trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US: images/crud_application_walkthrough and 1 other directories.

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Tue Jun 5 23:19:26 EDT 2012


Author: irooskov at redhat.com
Date: 2012-06-05 23:19:23 -0400 (Tue, 05 Jun 2012)
New Revision: 41732

Modified:
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/crud_application_walkthrough.xml
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/crud_database_application.xml
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_4.png
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_5.png
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_6.png
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_7.png
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_8.png
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_database_application/crud_database_application_18.png
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/seam_faq.xml
   trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/testng.xml
Log:
updated with final QE review from JBDS-2022


Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2012-06-06 00:09:50 UTC (rev 41731)
+++ trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2012-06-06 03:19:23 UTC (rev 41732)
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 	<productname>JBoss Developer Studio</productname>
 	<productnumber>5.0</productnumber>
 	<edition>5.0.0</edition>
-	<pubsnumber>5</pubsnumber>
+	<pubsnumber>6</pubsnumber>
 	<abstract>
 		<para>The Seam Developer Tools Reference Guide explains how to use the Seam Developer Tools module to create Seam projects for deployment.</para>
 	</abstract>

Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/crud_application_walkthrough.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/crud_application_walkthrough.xml	2012-06-06 00:09:50 UTC (rev 41731)
+++ trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/crud_application_walkthrough.xml	2012-06-06 03:19:23 UTC (rev 41732)
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
     </figure>
      
     <para>
-      After that you can use CRUD application with <property>&quot;employee&quot;</property> database.
+      After that you can use the CRUD application with the <emphasis>employee</emphasis> database.
     </para>
      
     <para>
@@ -88,11 +88,11 @@
     </para>
      
     <para>
-      Click on the <emphasis> <property>Employees List</property> </emphasis> link and observe that data from <emphasis> <property>employee</property> </emphasis> database is displayed.
+		Hover the mouse over <guibutton>Browse</guilabel> in the very top menu and select <guimenuitem>Employees List</guimenuitem> from the expanded list. Observe that data from the <emphasis> <property>employee</property> </emphasis> database is displayed.
     </para>
      
     <figure>
-      <title>Employees List Page</title> 
+      <title>Displayed employee data</title> 
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
           <imagedata
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
     </para>
      
     <para>
-      Press <property>Select</property> opposite one of employees.
+		Click the <guibutton>View</guibutton> button in the <guilabel>Action</guilabel> column of one of the employees.
     </para>
      
     <figure>
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
     </para>
      
     <para>
-      Enter <emphasis> <property>Login</property> </emphasis> and <emphasis> <property>Password</property> </emphasis> to login. (Use <emphasis>&quot;crudapp-user&quot;/&quot;secret&quot;</emphasis> for example)
+      Enter <emphasis> <property>Login</property> </emphasis> and <emphasis> <property>Password</property> </emphasis> to login (for example, admin as the login and leaving the password field blank).
     </para>
      
     <figure>

Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/crud_database_application.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/crud_database_application.xml	2012-06-06 00:09:50 UTC (rev 41731)
+++ trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/crud_database_application.xml	2012-06-06 03:19:23 UTC (rev 41732)
@@ -32,7 +32,11 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
           First, you should <ulink url="http://docs.jboss.org/tools/resources/"
-                        >download</ulink> a database and start it by running <emphasis> <property>./runDBServer.sh</property> </emphasis> or <emphasis> <property>runDBServer.bat</property> </emphasis> from the database directory.
+			  >download</ulink> the <filename>employee-hsqlb</filename> database, extract the <filename>employee-hsqldb.zip</filename> and start it by running <emphasis>
+                  <property>./runDBServer.sh</property>
+              </emphasis> or <emphasis>
+                  <property>runDBServer.bat</property>
+              </emphasis> from the database directory.
         </para>
       </listitem>
        
@@ -159,7 +163,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          You may notice the note on the previous figure. It prompts that you should specify the driver of the type you pointed. Set the location of the driver by switching to the next tab and press <emphasis> <property>Add JAR/Zip</property> </emphasis> button.
+			You may notice the note on the previous figure. It prompts that you should specify the driver of the type you pointed. Set the location of the driver by selecting <filename>hsqldb.jar</filename> from the list and clicking the <guibutton>Edit JAR/ZIP</guibutton> button.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -178,7 +182,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          On the <property>Properties</property> tab set the <emphasis><property>Connection URL</property>,</emphasis> <emphasis> <property>Database Name</property> </emphasis> and <emphasis> <property>User ID</property> </emphasis> and click <emphasis> <property>OK</property>. </emphasis>
+			On the <guilabel>Properties</guilabel> tab set the <guilabel>Connection URL</guilabel> to <emphasis>jdbc:hsqldb:hsql://localhost:1701</emphasis>, <guilabel>Database Name</guilabel> to <emphasis>employee</emphasis> and <guilabel>User ID</guilabel> to <emphasis>sa</emphasis> and click <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -273,7 +277,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Have a look at the created projects. You can expand <property>WEB_CONTENT</property> folder and open <property>home.xhtml</property> or <property>login.xhtml</property> with <property>JBoss Visual Editor</property>.
+          You can expand the <property>WEB_CONTENT</property> folder of the application and open <property>home.xhtml</property> or <property>login.xhtml</property> with <property>JBoss Visual Editor</property>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -292,7 +296,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Switch to <property>Database Development</property> perspective with <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Window</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Open Perspective</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Other...</guimenuitem></menuchoice> and connect to the <emphasis> <property>cruddb</property> </emphasis> database.
+          Connect to the <emphasis> <property>cruddb</property> </emphasis> database if not already connected to it.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -330,7 +334,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Switch back to the <property>Seam</property> perspective. From the toolbar select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Seam Generate Entities</guimenuitem></menuchoice> to create a set of <property>CRUD</property> Seam components and web pages based on existing tables in the database. On the first page of <emphasis> <property>Generate Seam Entities</property> </emphasis> wizard keep everything by default and press <emphasis> <property>Next</property>. </emphasis>
+          Switch back to the <property>Seam</property> perspective. From the toolbar select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Seam Generate Entities</guimenuitem></menuchoice> to create a set of <property>CRUD</property> Seam components and web pages based on existing tables in the database. On the first page of <emphasis> <property>Generate Seam Entities</property> </emphasis> wizard, select <guilabel>Reverse engineer from database</guilabel> click press <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -368,7 +372,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Now you can filter the tables. Use the <emphasis> <property>Include</property> </emphasis> button to include only necessary ones.
+          Now you can filter the tables. Use the <guibutton>Include</guibutton> button to include those that are necessary and click <guibutton>Finish</guibutton>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_4.png
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Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_5.png
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Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_6.png
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Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_7.png
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Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_application_walkthrough/crud_application_walkthrough_8.png
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Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/images/crud_database_application/crud_database_application_18.png
===================================================================
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Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/seam_faq.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/seam_faq.xml	2012-06-06 00:09:50 UTC (rev 41731)
+++ trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/seam_faq.xml	2012-06-06 03:19:23 UTC (rev 41732)
@@ -54,16 +54,5 @@
     <para>
       You should right-click the project, select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Java Build Path,</guimenuitem></menuchoice> then switch to the <emphasis> <property>Source tab</property>,</emphasis> select the output folder for <emphasis> <property>src/hot</property></emphasis> (<emphasis> <property>src/main</property>)</emphasis> and click <emphasis> <property>Edit</property></emphasis> to change their output location.
     </para>
-     
-    <para>
-      In conclusion, the main goal of this document is to get you know with a full feature set that <property>JBoss Tools</property> provides to support Seam development. Thus if you have some questions, comments or suggestions on the topic, please fell free to ask in the <ulink
-                url="http://www.jboss.com/index.html?module=bb&amp;op=viewforum&amp;f=201">JBoss Tools Forum</ulink>. You can also influence on how you want to see JBoss Tools docs in future leaving your vote on the article <ulink
-                url="http://wiki.jboss.org/wiki/JBossToolsDocsFuture"
-                >Overview of the improvements required by JBossTools/JBDS Docs users</ulink>.
-    </para>
-     
-    <para>
-      A set of movies on Seam tooling is available on <ulink url="http://docs.jboss.org/tools/movies">Seam movies page</ulink>.
-    </para>
   </section>
 </chapter>

Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/testng.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/testng.xml	2012-06-06 00:09:50 UTC (rev 41731)
+++ trunk/seam/docs/reference/en-US/testng.xml	2012-06-06 03:19:23 UTC (rev 41732)
@@ -10,12 +10,6 @@
       <keyword>testNG</keyword>
     </keywordset>
   </chapterinfo>
-   <title>Using TestNG project</title> 
-  <para>
-    With the help this chapter you will get to know with TestNG.
-  </para>
-   
-  <section>
     <title>What is TestNG?</title> 
     <para>
       <property>TestNG</property> (&quot;Testing, the Next Generation&quot;) is a Java unit testing framework that aims to overcome many limitations of JUnit. TestNG introduces some new functionalities that make it more powerful and easier to use, such as:
@@ -82,14 +76,7 @@
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-     
-    <para>
-      More information can be found on home page: <ulink url="http://testng.org"
-                >www.testng.org</ulink>
-    </para>
-  </section>
-   
-  <section id="OtherRelevantResourcesOnTheTopic5">
+<!--  <section id="OtherRelevantResourcesOnTheTopic5">
 <?dbhtml filename="OtherRelevantResourcesOnTheTopic5.html"?>
     <title>Other relevant resources on the topic</title> 
     <para>
@@ -111,7 +98,7 @@
     <para>
       <ulink url="http://www-128.ibm.com/developerworks/java/library/j-cq08296/index.html">In pursuit of code quality: JUnit 4 vs. TestNG</ulink>
     </para>
-  </section>
+</section> -->
    
   <section>
     <title>How to use the generated Seam-test project to run Seam tests?</title> 



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