[jbosstools-commits] JBoss Tools SVN: r41948 - in trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US: images/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application and 1 other directory.

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Wed Jun 13 19:00:36 EDT 2012 

Author: irooskov at redhat.com
Date: 2012-06-13 19:00:36 -0400 (Wed, 13 Jun 2012)
New Revision: 41948

Modified:
   trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml
   trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application.xml
   trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Deleting_applications_and_domains.xml
   trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Import_existing_application.xml
   trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Introduction.xml
   trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Viewing_the_remote_console.xml
   trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/images/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application/application_creation_10.png
   trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/images/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application/application_creation_12.png
Log:
updated with QE feedback integrated


Modified: trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2012-06-13 22:44:42 UTC (rev 41947)
+++ trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2012-06-13 23:00:36 UTC (rev 41948)
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
    
   <edition>5.0.0</edition>
    
-  <pubsnumber>12</pubsnumber>
+  <pubsnumber>13</pubsnumber>
    
   <abstract>
     <para>

Modified: trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application.xml	2012-06-13 22:44:42 UTC (rev 41947)
+++ trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application.xml	2012-06-13 23:00:36 UTC (rev 41948)
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
 		</para>
 	</note>
 	<para>
-		You can also select to embed cartridges into your applicaiton. By embedding a cartridge, you allow your application the ability to use the asociated technology. For example, embedding the <guilabel>mysql</guilabel> cartridge will grant your application the capability to use a MySQL database.
+		You can also select to embed cartridges into your applicaiton. By embedding a cartridge, you allow your application the ability to use the associated technology. For example, embedding the <guilabel>mysql</guilabel> cartridge will grant your application the capability to use a MySQL database.
 	</para>
 	<figure id="application_creation_06">
 		<title>Application setup</title>
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
 		Click the <guibutton>Finish</guibutton> to begin the cloning of the Git repository.
 	</para>
 	<figure id="application_creation_09">
-		<title>Importing the project</title>
+		<title>Project added to available Git repositories</title>
 		<mediaobject>
 			<imageobject>
 				<imagedata fileref="images/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application/application_creation_09.png" format="PNG" />
@@ -149,20 +149,20 @@
 		After the Git repository has been cloned, it will be available through the <guilabel>Git Repositories</guilabel> view. You can open it by navigating to <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Window</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Show View</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Other</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Git</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Git Repositories</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. With the <guilabel>Git Repositories</guilabel> option selected, click <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.
 	</para>
 	<figure id="application_creation_10">
-		<title>Project in Package Explorer</title>
+		<title>Project in Project Explorer</title>
 		<mediaobject>
 			<imageobject>
 				<imagedata fileref="images/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application/application_creation_10.png" format="PNG" />
 			</imageobject>
 			<textobject>
 				<phrase>
-					The project you just created is now available within the Package Explorer.
+					The project you just created is now available within the Project Explorer.
 				</phrase>
 			</textobject>
 		</mediaobject>
 	</figure>
 	<para>
-		The OpenShift application that you created through the wizard, will appear in your <guilabel>Package Explorer</guilabel> tab. 
+		The OpenShift application that you created through the wizard, will appear in your <guilabel>Project Explorer</guilabel> tab. 
 	</para>
 	<figure id="application_creation_11">
 		<title>Publising your project through the server adapter</title>

Modified: trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Deleting_applications_and_domains.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Deleting_applications_and_domains.xml	2012-06-13 22:44:42 UTC (rev 41947)
+++ trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Deleting_applications_and_domains.xml	2012-06-13 23:00:36 UTC (rev 41948)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 	<section>
 		<title>Deleting an application</title>
 		<para>
-			Deleting an application will remove it from your workbench and the OpenShift server.
+			Deleting an application will only remove it from the OpenShift server. The application and OpenShift server adapter will remain in your workbench.
 		</para>
 		<para>
 			To remove an application right-click on it in the <guilabel>OpenShift Explorer</guilabel> view tab and select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Delete Application(s)</guimenuitem></menuchoice> from the context menu.
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
 	<section>
 		<title>Deleting a domain</title>
 		<para>
-			To delete a domain right-click on your server in the <guilabel>OpenShift Explorer</guilabel> view tab and select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Delete Domain</guimenuitem></menuchoice> from the context menu.
+			To delete a domain right-click on your server connection in the <guilabel>OpenShift Explorer</guilabel> view tab and select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Delete Domain</guimenuitem></menuchoice> from the context menu.
 		</para>
 		<figure id="delete_application_and_domain_04">
 			<title>Delete Domain menu item</title>
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 			</mediaobject>
 		</figure>
 		<para>
-			Once the domain has been deleted the OpenShift server will remain, however the <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Delete Domain</guimenuitem></menuchoice> option will not be available from the context menu.
+			Once the domain has been deleted the connection to OpenShift will remain, however the <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Delete Domain</guimenuitem></menuchoice> option will not be available from the context menu.
 		</para>
 		<figure id="delete_application_and_domain_06">
 			<title>Delete Domain option not available</title>

Modified: trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Import_existing_application.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Import_existing_application.xml	2012-06-13 22:44:42 UTC (rev 41947)
+++ trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Import_existing_application.xml	2012-06-13 23:00:36 UTC (rev 41948)
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 		A dialog will open where you will see all your OpenShift applications listed, for the current domain.
 	</para>
 	<figure id="import_existing_application_02">
-		<title>Setup OpenShift Application screen</title>
+		<title>Existing applications on OpenShift</title>
 		<mediaobject>
 			<imageobject>
 				<imagedata fileref="images/Import_Existing_Application/import_existing_application_02.png" format="PNG" />
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 		By selecting an application from the list and clicking the <guibutton>Details</guibutton> button you can see all relevant application information. Click the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to return to the application selection screen.
 	</para>
 	<figure id="import_existing_application_03">
-		<title>Setup OpenShift Application screen</title>
+		<title>Details of OpenShift application</title>
 		<mediaobject>
 			<imageobject>
 				<imagedata fileref="images/Import_Existing_Application/import_existing_application_03.png" format="PNG" />
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 		</mediaobject>
 	</figure>
 	<para>
-		To complete importing the application click the <guibutton>Next</guibutton> button and continue follow the instructions after the <guilabel>Setup OpenShift Application</guilabel> screen that are available in the <emphasis>Creating an OpenShift Express Application</emphasis> chapter: <xref linkend="application_creation_07" />.
+		To complete importing the application click the <guibutton>Next</guibutton> button and continue follow the instructions after the <guilabel>Setup OpenShift Application</guilabel> screen that are available in the <emphasis>Creating an OpenShift Application</emphasis> chapter: <xref linkend="application_creation_07" />.
 	</para>
 </chapter>
 

Modified: trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Introduction.xml	2012-06-13 22:44:42 UTC (rev 41947)
+++ trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Introduction.xml	2012-06-13 23:00:36 UTC (rev 41948)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
    <chapter id="chap-OpenSift_Tools_Reference_Guide-Introduction">
 	<title>Introduction</title>
 	<para>
-		OpenShift is a cloud solution for your application server requirements. OpenShift is a cloud-based application platform for Java, Perl, PHP, Python, and Ruby applications. JBoss Developer Studio supports OpenShift deployments and this guide will show you how to connect, create and deploy with OpenShift from your JBoss Developer Studio workbench.
+		OpenShift is a cloud solution for your application server requirements. OpenShift is a cloud-based application platform for Java, Perl, PHP, Python, and Ruby applications. JBoss Developer Studio supports OpenShift deployments and this guide will show you how to connect, create and deploy applications with OpenShift, from your workbench.
 	</para>
 </chapter>
 

Modified: trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Viewing_the_remote_console.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Viewing_the_remote_console.xml	2012-06-13 22:44:42 UTC (rev 41947)
+++ trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/Viewing_the_remote_console.xml	2012-06-13 23:00:36 UTC (rev 41948)
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 		Similar to when you are running a server locally, you are also able to see console output for your remote OpenShift server. To have this output displayed to you, right-click on your OpenShift application in the <guilabel>OpenShift</guilabel> view tab, and select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Tail files</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.   
 	</para>
 	<figure id="openshift_remote_console_01">
-		<title>Tailing OpenShift server option</title>
+		<title>Tailing OpenShift server files option</title>
 		<mediaobject>
 			<imageobject>
 				<imagedata fileref="images/OpenShift_Remote_Console/openshift_remote_console_01.png" format="PNG" />

Modified: trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/images/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application/application_creation_10.png
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Modified: trunk/openshift/docs/reference/en-US/images/Creating_an_OpenShift_Express_Application/application_creation_12.png
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