[jbosstools-commits] JBoss Tools SVN: r42093 - trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US.

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Author: irooskov at redhat.com
Date: 2012-06-19 17:01:13 -0400 (Tue, 19 Jun 2012)
New Revision: 42093

Modified:
   trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/Book_Info.xml
   trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/getting_started_example.xml
Log:
updated based on QE review


Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/Book_Info.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2012-06-19 21:00:06 UTC (rev 42092)
+++ trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2012-06-19 21:01:13 UTC (rev 42093)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <productname>JBoss Developer Studio</productname>
 <productnumber>5.0</productnumber>
 <edition>5.0.0</edition>
-<pubsnumber>28</pubsnumber>
+<pubsnumber>29</pubsnumber>
 <abstract>
 <para>The Getting Started Guide explains the JBoss Developer Studio.</para>
 </abstract>

Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/getting_started_example.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/getting_started_example.xml	2012-06-19 21:00:06 UTC (rev 42092)
+++ trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/getting_started_example.xml	2012-06-19 21:01:13 UTC (rev 42093)
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 	   <title>Example of developing a Java EE6, HTML5, Maven application for mobile devices</title>
 <section id="_purpose_and_target_audience">
 <title>Purpose and Target Audience</title>
-<simpara>This tutorial sets the stage for the creation of TicketMonster. This sample application illustrates how to bring together the best features of <emphasis role="strong">Java EE 6, HTML5 and JBoss</emphasis> to create a rich, mobile-optimized and dynamic application
+<simpara>We illustrate here how to bring together the best features of <emphasis role="strong">Java EE 6, HTML5 and JBoss</emphasis> to create a rich, mobile-optimized and dynamic application
 <ulink url="https://github.com/jboss/ticket-monster">https://github.com/jboss/ticket-monster</ulink>.</simpara>
 <simpara>Through this tutorial, you will:</simpara>
 <itemizedlist>