[jbosstools-commits] JBoss Tools SVN: r39360 - trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US.

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Wed Mar 7 19:43:32 EST 2012


Author: irooskov at redhat.com
Date: 2012-03-07 19:43:31 -0500 (Wed, 07 Mar 2012)
New Revision: 39360

Modified:
   trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/Book_Info.xml
   trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/jsp_application.xml
   trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/rad_jsf_application.xml
Log:
updated with qe updates


Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/Book_Info.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2012-03-08 00:36:20 UTC (rev 39359)
+++ trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2012-03-08 00:43:31 UTC (rev 39360)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <productname>JBoss Developer Studio</productname>
 <productnumber>5.0</productnumber>
 <edition>5.0.0</edition>
-<pubsnumber>12</pubsnumber>
+<pubsnumber>13</pubsnumber>
 <abstract>
 <para>The Getting Started Guide explains the JBoss Developer Studio.</para>
 </abstract>

Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/jsp_application.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/jsp_application.xml	2012-03-08 00:36:20 UTC (rev 39359)
+++ trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/jsp_application.xml	2012-03-08 00:43:31 UTC (rev 39360)
@@ -11,16 +11,15 @@
     </keywordset>
   </chapterinfo>
    <title>Developing a simple JSP web application</title> 
-  <note>
+<!--  <note>
     <title>Note:</title> 
     <para>
       We highly recommend developing in <property>Seam</property>. This chapter is for users who for some reason cannot use Seam.
     </para>
-  </note>
+</note> -->
    
   <para>
-    In this chapter you'll find out how to create a simple <ulink
-		url="http://java.sun.com/products/jsp/">JSP</ulink> application using <property>JBoss Developer Studio</property>. The application will show a classic &quot;Hello World!&quot; on the page.
+    In this chapter you'll find out how to create a simple JSP application using <property>JBoss Developer Studio</property>. The application will show a classic &quot;Hello World!&quot; on the page.
   </para>
    
   <para>
@@ -263,7 +262,7 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="DeployTheProject.html"?>
       <title>Deploying the project</title> 
       <para>
-        Writing ant scripts and managing the packaging process can be quite a complicated and time consuming task for even the most trivial web applications. However, <property>JBoss Developer Studio</property> relieves you of this burden. All you need is to start <property>JBoss Server</property> and launch your application in your favorite browser.
+        Writing ant scripts and managing the packaging process can be quite a complicated and time consuming task for even the most trivial web applications. However, <property>JBoss Developer Studio</property> relieves you of this burden. All you need is to start your <property>JBoss Server</property> and launch your application in your favorite browser.
       </para>
        
       <para>
@@ -274,7 +273,7 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="JarConfig.html"?>
         <title>JAR Config</title> 
         <para>
-          Project archives managing is available through Project Archives view.
+          Project archives managing is available through the Project Archives view.
         </para>
          
         <itemizedlist>
@@ -376,7 +375,7 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="AutoRedeploy.html"?>
         <title>Auto redeploy</title> 
         <para>
-			When you are creating a web application and register it on <property>JBoss Server</property> it is automatically deployed into the <filename>/deploy</filename> directory of the server. JBoss Developer Studio comes with the feature of auto-redeploy. It means that you don&apos;t need to restart <property>JBoss Server</property>. Any changes made in the application in exploded format will trigger a redeployment on the server.
+			When you create a web application and register it on the <property>JBoss Server</property> as it is automatically deployed into the <filename>/deploy</filename> directory of the server. JBoss Developer Studio's auto-redeploy feature ensures you do not need to restart the server. Any changes made in the application in exploded format will trigger a redeployment on the server.
         </para>
          
         <para>
@@ -450,13 +449,13 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="LaunchingTheProject.html"?>
       <title>Launch JSP Project</title> 
       <para>
-        Let&apos;s now launch our project on server. We&apos;ll use <property>JBoss Server</property> that is shipped with <property>JBoss Developer Studio</property>. You can do it by performing one of the following actions:
+        Now launch the project onto a JBoss server:
       </para>
        
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            Start JBoss Server from Servers view by clicking the Start the server icon ( 
+            Start a JBoss Server from the Servers view by clicking the Start the server icon ( 
             <inlinemediaobject>
               <imageobject>
                 <imagedata fileref="images/jsp_application/jsp_application_18.png"/>
@@ -499,7 +498,7 @@
       </figure>
        
       <para>
-		  Thus with the help of this chapter you&apos;ve learnt how to organize a Dynamic Web Project with a minimal configuration, add new elements to it (in our case it&apos;s just one JSP page) and deploy and run it on the <property>JBoss Server</property> shipped with <property>JBoss Developer Studio</property>.
+		  You have learnt how to organize a Dynamic Web Project with a minimal configuration, add new elements to it (in our case it is a JSP page), deploy, and run it on a JBoss Server from within JBoss Developer Studio.
       </para>
     </section>
   </section>

Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/rad_jsf_application.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/rad_jsf_application.xml	2012-03-08 00:36:20 UTC (rev 39359)
+++ trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/rad_jsf_application.xml	2012-03-08 00:43:31 UTC (rev 39360)
@@ -9,24 +9,23 @@
 			<keyword>RAD</keyword>
 		</keywordset>
 	</chapterinfo>
-	<title>RAD development of a simple JSF application</title>
+	<title>Rapid Application Development of a JSF application</title>
 
-	<note>
+<!--	<note>
 		<title>Note:</title>
 		<para>We highly recommend developing in <property>Seam</property>. This chapter is for users
             who for some reason cannot use <property>Seam</property>.</para>
-	</note>
+		</note> -->
 
-	<para>In this chapter you will learn how to create a simple JSF application being based on the
-            <property>&quot;RAD&quot;</property> philosophy. We will create the familiar
+	<para>In this chapter you will learn how to create a JSF application being based on the Rapid Application Development (RAD) philosophy. We will create the familiar
         Guess Number application. The game is played according to the following rules. You are asked to guess a number
         between 0 and 100. If the guess is correct, a success page is displayed with a link to play
         again. If the guess is incorrect, a message is printed notifying that a smaller or a larger
         number should be entered and the game continues.</para>
-	<para>We&apos;ll show you how to create such an application from scratch, along the way
+	<para>You will now learn how to create such an application from scratch, along the way
         demonstrating the powerful features included in JBoss Developer Studio such as project templating, Visual
         Page Editor, code completion and others. You will design the JSF application and then run
-        the application from inside JBoss Developer Studio using the bundled JBoss server.</para>
+        the application from inside JBoss Developer Studio using a JBoss server.</para>
 
 	<section id="SettingUpTheProject12">
 		<?dbhtml filename="SettingUpTheProject12.html"?>
@@ -80,7 +79,7 @@
             should be tried. The second page is called <filename>success.jsp</filename>. This page will be shown after you guess
             the number correctly. From this page you also have the option to play the game again.</para>
 
-		<para>Now, we will guide you through the steps on how to do this.</para>
+		<para>Steps for adding two pages to your application:</para>
 		<itemizedlist>
 			<listitem>
 				<para>First a folder called <filename>pages</filename> needs to be created under the <filename>WebContent</filename> folder. To do this right click on the <filename>WebContent</filename> folder in the Package Explorer view and select <menuchoice><guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>Folder</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. Set the <guilabel>Folder Name</guilabel> to <filename>pages</filename> and click the <guibutton>Finish</guibutton> button.</para>
@@ -185,9 +184,9 @@
 	<section id="CreatingResourceFile">
 		<?dbhtml filename="CreatingResourceFile.html"?>
 		<title>Creating Resource File</title>
-		<para>A resource file is just a file with a <emphasis>.properties</emphasis> extension for
+		<para>A resource file is a file with a <emphasis>.properties</emphasis> extension for
             collecting text messages in one central place. JBoss Developer Studio allows you to
-            create quickly a resource file. The messages stored in resource file can be displayed to
+            create quickly a resource file. The messages stored in a resource file can be displayed to
             you on a Web page during application execution. </para>
 		<para>
 			With resource file you don&apos;t hard code anything into the JSP pages. It also makes it easier to translate your application to other languages. All you have to do is to translate all your messages to the other language and save them in a new properties file with a name that ends with the appropriate ISO-639 language code.



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