[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (TOOLSDOC-341) Review: QE to review Beta1 Release Notes

[Len DiMaggio (JIRA)]

     [ https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TOOLSDOC-341?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Len DiMaggio updated TOOLSDOC-341:
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Section:
1.1. About JBoss Developer Studio

Text:
Additionally, each of the tools comprising JBoss Developer Studio has great
features to assist your application development:

Comment:
I think it would be better to refer to JBDS as a whole, as opposed a set of tools. Maybe this sentence can be reworded as:

Additionally, JBoss Developer Studio has great features to assist your application development:

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Section:
1.2. Use Cases of JBoss Developer Studio

Text:
JBoss Developer Studio assists JEE developers by integrating JBoss technology and APIs in a single development environment. Here are a few ways that JBoss Developer Studio makes the work of a developer easier.

Comment:
Very small point - end with a ":" not a "."

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Section:
1.2. Use Cases of JBoss Developer Studio

Text:
BrowserSim allows you to view your web applications on a variety of simulated mobile devices so that you can ensure they will be correct formatted.

Comment:
This is a small point. Can we change this to read: "correctly formatted"?

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Chapter 2. New Features

You asked for input on this subject:

JBoss Central
NeedInfo: Cheat sheets for 'Start from a sample' project wizards are now automatically opened when projects are created and the cheat sheets can be subsequently accessed via the Show In option in project context menus.

See the attached screenshot for an illustration on what this looks like.

and:

JBoss Server Tools
NeedInfo: Additionally, you can choose to either stop or undeploy an
application from the server via the administrative console.

I'm not sure what your question is here. Users can deploy/undeploy applications to servers from either inside JBDS, or from the Admin Console provided by EAP or SOA-P.


                
> Review: QE to review Beta1 Release Notes
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>
>                 Key: TOOLSDOC-341
>                 URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TOOLSDOC-341
>             Project: Documentation for JBoss Tools and Developer Studio
>          Issue Type: Task
>      Security Level: Public(Everyone can see) 
>          Components: Release Notes
>    Affects Versions: 4.1.0
>            Reporter: Michelle Murray
>            Assignee: Jiri Peterka
>             Fix For: 4.1.0
>
>         Attachments: Red_Hat_JBoss_Developer_Studio-7.0-Release_Notes_7.0.0-en-US.pdf, Screenshot.png
>
>
> *Please review* the Beta1 Release Notes document:
> 1) Are new features correctly documented?
> 2) Are there any new features that are missing?
> 3) Are there any JIRAs for resolved and unresolved bugs missing? Queries used were: Resolved = https://issues.jboss.org/issues/?filter=12319302 and Unresolved = https://issues.jboss.org/issues/?filter=12319301
> *Please give feedback* as comments in this JIRA, to assist tracking. The doc is available here as a pdf. Alternatively, the doc is also available on other formats at http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_JBoss_Developer_Studio/7.0/
> *To make this document better*, we could do with culling the list of JIRAs down to those that need to be included in release notes. This requires someone to go through the JIRA list manually and set the 'Affects' field to 'Release Notes'. This task will have to be done for GA release notes anyway.

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