[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (TOOLSDOC-418) Awkward wording in section section 1.1

[Len DiMaggio (JIRA)]

Len DiMaggio created TOOLSDOC-418:
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             Summary: Awkward wording in section section 1.1
                 Key: TOOLSDOC-418
                 URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TOOLSDOC-418
             Project: Documentation for JBoss Tools and Developer Studio
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: Installation Guide
         Environment: Build Name: 22485, Release Notes 7.1.0-7.1-7.1.0
Build Date: 01-11-2013 17:01:22
Topic ID: 22589-550126 [Latest]
            Reporter: Len DiMaggio
            Assignee: Michelle Murray
            Priority: Minor


Title: About Red Hat JBoss Developer Studio

Describe the issue:

This is a minor point, but the wording of this section has always seemed awkward:

{quote}
Furthermore, JBoss Developer Studio has many unique features to assist your application development:

    Develop new applications using the wizards and project examples of JBoss Central.
    Add powerful functionality to applications with minimal effort using Forge Tools. 
.
.
{quote}

Suggestions for improvement:

Can we change this to:

{quote}
Furthermore, JBoss Developer Studio has many unique features to assist your application development by enabling you to:

    Develop new applications using the wizards and project examples of JBoss Central.
    Add powerful functionality to applications with minimal effort using Forge Tools. 
{quote}

Additional information:

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