[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (TOOLSDOC-418) Awkward wording in section section 1.1
Michelle Murray (JIRA)
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Mon Nov 4 20:11:02 EST 2013
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Michelle Murray edited comment on TOOLSDOC-418 at 11/4/13 8:10 PM:
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Resolved to:
{quote}
Furthermore, JBoss Developer Studio can assist your application development with its unique features in the following ways:
{quote}
PR merged with master and 4.1.x: https://github.com/jbosstools/jbosstools-documentation/pull/205
Available for review at:
http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_JBoss_Developer_Studio/7.1/html-single/Release_Notes_7.1.0/index.html#About_Red_Hat_JBoss_Developer_Studio1
was (Author: mmurray):
Resolved to:
{quote}
Furthermore, JBoss Developer Studio can assist your application development with its unique features in the following ways:
{quote}
PR merged with master and 4.1.x: https://github.com/jbosstools/jbosstools-documentation/pull/205
> Awkward wording in section section 1.1
> --------------------------------------
>
> Key: TOOLSDOC-418
> URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TOOLSDOC-418
> Project: Documentation for JBoss Tools and Developer Studio
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Installation Guide
> Environment: Build Name: 22485, Release Notes 7.1.0-7.1-7.1.0
> Build Date: 01-11-2013 17:01:22
> Topic ID: 22589-550126 [Latest]
> Reporter: Len DiMaggio
> Assignee: Michelle Murray
> Priority: Minor
>
> Title: About Red Hat JBoss Developer Studio
> Describe the issue:
> This is a minor point, but the wording of this section has always seemed awkward:
> {quote}
> Furthermore, JBoss Developer Studio has many unique features to assist your application development:
> Develop new applications using the wizards and project examples of JBoss Central.
> Add powerful functionality to applications with minimal effort using Forge Tools.
> .
> .
> {quote}
> Suggestions for improvement:
> Can we change this to:
> {quote}
> Furthermore, JBoss Developer Studio has many unique features to assist your application development by enabling you to:
> Develop new applications using the wizards and project examples of JBoss Central.
> Add powerful functionality to applications with minimal effort using Forge Tools.
> {quote}
> Additional information:
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