[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (JBDS-2818) Text in Early Access and Update page needs minor editing

[Nick Boldt (JIRA)]

    [ https://issues.jboss.org/browse/JBDS-2818?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=12851170#comment-12851170 ] 

Nick Boldt edited comment on JBDS-2818 at 11/5/13 6:50 PM:
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How about this instead?

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*Release Notes & Documentation*

The following link provides Release Notes for JBoss Developer Studio, together with other documentation. As this is an Early Access release, documentation may not yet cover all the expected features of the final product, or may in fact not yet exist.


* [JBoss Developer Studio Release Notes & Documentation|https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/Red_Hat_JBoss_Developer_Studio/]

The following link provides a list of issues closed in this release. Please note that documents pertaining to JBoss Tools may make mention of functionality not included or planned for inclusion in JBoss Developer Studio at this time.


* [JBoss Tools and Developer Studio - Resolved Issues|https://issues.jboss.org/secure/IssueNavigator!executeAdvanced.jspa?jqlQuery=project+in+(JBIDE,+JBDS,+TOOLSDOC)+AND+fixVersion+in+(%278.0.0.Alpha1%27,+%274.0.0.Alpha1%27)+and+Status+in+(Resolved,Closed)&runQuery=true&clear=true]
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For 8.0.0.Alpha1, we can include the JIRA link; for 7.1.0.Beta1, we can omit it (since we'll have Beta doc). 
                
      was (Author: nickboldt):
    How about this instead?

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*Release Notes & Documentation*

The following link provides Release Notes for JBoss Developer Studio, together with other documentation. As this is an Early Access release, documentation may not yet cover all the expected features of the final product, or may in fact not yet exist.


* [JBoss Developer Studio Release Notes & Documentation|https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/Red_Hat_JBoss_Developer_Studio/]

The following link provides a list of issues closed in this release. Please note that documents pertaining to JBoss Tools may make mention of functionality not included or planned for inclusion in JBoss Developer Studio at this time.


* [JBoss Tools and Developer Studio - Resolved Issues|https://issues.jboss.org/secure/IssueNavigator!executeAdvanced.jspa?jqlQuery=project+in+(JBIDE,+JBDS,+TOOLSDOC)+AND+fixVersion+in+(%278.0.0.Alpha1%27,+%274.0.0.Alpha1%27)+and+Status+in+(Resolved,Closed)&runQuery=true&clear=true]

For 8.0.0.Alpha1, we can include the JIRA link; for 7.1.0.Beta1, we can omit it (since we'll have Beta doc). 
                  
> Text in Early Access and Update page needs minor editing
> --------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: JBDS-2818
>                 URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/JBDS-2818
>             Project: Developer Studio (JBoss Developer Studio)
>          Issue Type: Bug
>      Security Level: Public(Everyone can see) 
>          Components: documentation
>    Affects Versions: 7.0.1.GA
>            Reporter: Michelle Murray
>            Assignee: Nick Boldt
>             Fix For: 7.1.0.CR1, 8.0.0.Alpha1
>
>
> Both of these templates need the text modifying (to fit Red Hat writing style and 508 compliance):
> https://devstudio.jboss.com/updates/7.0/
> https://devstudio.jboss.com/earlyaccess/7.0.0.GA.html
> *Common text modifications:*
> * Section "Installation :: Core Tooling"
> {quote}
> 1. If not already installed, download and install Oracle JDK or OpenJDK 7 (or 6).
> 2. Download the JBDS universal installer from <link>.
> 3. To start the installer, double-click the installer file or in a CLI enter java -jar jbdevstudio-*.jar
> {quote}
> * Section "Looking for JBoss EAP ..."
> Logo has changed, now just logotype. Looking for link.
> *  Section "Getting Started Guide:"
> {quote}
> Adding *JBoss* EAP to JBDS
> {quote}
> *Early Access text modifications:*
> * Title should be "*Red Hat* JBoss Developer Studio ......"
> * Intro text
> {quote}
> We wish to give customers and users early access to *JBoss Developer Studio* so *that* we can make the next version of JBoss Developer Studio an even better environment for developing with and for Red Hat JBoss Middleware.
> {quote}
> *Updates text modifications*
> * Why do we have this text? I ask because, for example, in https://devstudio.jboss.com/updates/7.0/, on the right-hand side the "installer" link in installation step 2 takes you to https://devstudio.jboss.com/earlyaccess/7.0.0.GA.html where you can download what looks like the GA version without subscription or opting in to a trial. Also you can get JBDS BYOE without subscription or trial on Eclipse marketplace. Seems the text is outdated but I don't know all the ins and outs of JBDS marketing and alike - hence asking the question.
> {quote}
> If you do not already have a copy of JBoss Developer Studio, you can purchase a subscription or get a 
> 30-day Free Trial from here: https://access.redhat.com/downloads/.
> {quote}

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