[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (JBDS-2818) Text in Early Access and Update page needs minor editing

[Nick Boldt (JIRA)]

    [ https://issues.jboss.org/browse/JBDS-2818?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=12851452#comment-12851452 ] 

Nick Boldt edited comment on JBDS-2818 at 11/6/13 1:30 PM:
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Tweaked it a bit more - removed TOOLSDOC and split the JBIDE+JBDS query into two:

!JBDS2818-simpler-copy.png!

Rebuilt here: http://www.qa.jboss.com/binaries/RHDS/builds/staging/devstudio.product_master/installer/8.0.0.Alpha1.html
                
      was (Author: nickboldt):
    Tweaked it a bit more - removed TOOLSDOC and split the JBIDE+JBDS query into two:

!JBDS2818-simpler-copy.png!
                  
> Text in Early Access and Update page needs minor editing
> --------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: JBDS-2818
>                 URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/JBDS-2818
>             Project: Developer Studio (JBoss Developer Studio)
>          Issue Type: Bug
>      Security Level: Public(Everyone can see) 
>          Components: documentation
>    Affects Versions: 7.0.1.GA
>            Reporter: Michelle Murray
>            Assignee: Nick Boldt
>             Fix For: 7.1.0.CR1, 8.0.0.Alpha1
>
>         Attachments: JBDS2818-simpler-copy.png
>
>
> Both of these templates need the text modifying (to fit Red Hat writing style and 508 compliance):
> https://devstudio.jboss.com/updates/7.0/
> https://devstudio.jboss.com/earlyaccess/7.0.0.GA.html
> *Common text modifications:*
> * Section "Installation :: Core Tooling"
> {quote}
> 1. If not already installed, download and install Oracle JDK or OpenJDK 7 (or 6).
> 2. Download the JBDS universal installer from <link>.
> 3. To start the installer, double-click the installer file or in a CLI enter java -jar jbdevstudio-*.jar
> {quote}
> * Section "Looking for JBoss EAP ..."
> Logo has changed, now just logotype. Looking for link.
> *  Section "Getting Started Guide:"
> {quote}
> Adding *JBoss* EAP to JBDS
> {quote}
> *Early Access text modifications:*
> * Title should be "*Red Hat* JBoss Developer Studio ......"
> * Intro text
> {quote}
> We wish to give customers and users early access to *JBoss Developer Studio* so *that* we can make the next version of JBoss Developer Studio an even better environment for developing with and for Red Hat JBoss Middleware.
> {quote}
> *Updates text modifications*
> * Why do we have this text? I ask because, for example, in https://devstudio.jboss.com/updates/7.0/, on the right-hand side the "installer" link in installation step 2 takes you to https://devstudio.jboss.com/earlyaccess/7.0.0.GA.html where you can download what looks like the GA version without subscription or opting in to a trial. Also you can get JBDS BYOE without subscription or trial on Eclipse marketplace. Seems the text is outdated but I don't know all the ins and outs of JBDS marketing and alike - hence asking the question.
> {quote}
> If you do not already have a copy of JBoss Developer Studio, you can purchase a subscription or get a 
> 30-day Free Trial from here: https://access.redhat.com/downloads/.
> {quote}

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