[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (TOOLSDOC-642) JBDS Articles: draft intro text about why to do a certain thing

[Misha Ali (JIRA)]

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Misha Ali commented on TOOLSDOC-642:
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Feedback:

1. For FH:

This is a bit better but it should probably be edited so that it flows better. My suggestion:

Red Hat JBoss Developer Studio includes an Import wizard to allow users to quickly and easily import previously created FeedHenry applications. Once the application is imported, you can change or enhance the application, test the changes, and then push it back to the FeedHenry server.

Sentence one tells you why and sentence two tells you what you can do. Lots of room for improvement but I would keep it simple and specific.

I'd encourage you to work on the second one based on the feedback above to make it more concise and specific, as well as to cut down on unnecessary words. 

> JBDS Articles: draft intro text about why to do a certain thing
> ---------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: TOOLSDOC-642
>                 URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TOOLSDOC-642
>             Project: Documentation for JBoss Tools and Developer Studio
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: General documentation issues
>    Affects Versions: 4.2.3.Final
>            Reporter: Misha Ali
>            Assignee: Supriya Bharadwaj
>
> Need intro text about why a user would want to do the thing the article describes.
> For example, why would the user want to import a FH app, or why create a HTML5 web app, etc.



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