[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (JBDS-4220) Integration Stack Installation Guide peer review

[Gemma Sheldon (JIRA)]

     [ https://issues.jboss.org/browse/JBDS-4220?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Gemma Sheldon updated JBDS-4220:
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    Summary: Integration Stack Installation Guide peer review  (was: Installation Guide peer review)


> Integration Stack Installation Guide peer review
> ------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: JBDS-4220
>                 URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/JBDS-4220
>             Project: Red Hat JBoss Developer Studio (devstudio)
>          Issue Type: Bug
>            Reporter: Gemma Sheldon
>            Priority: Minor
>
> General peer review stuff from the JBDIS Installation Guide.
> *Chapter 2:*
> - Oxford comma after "architecture" in the first para.
> *Chapter 4:*
>  - "At the Select Additional Features to Install screen, select the required components: "
> This could be "Select the required components from the Select Additional Features to Install screen"?
>  - "When done, JBoss Developer Studio Integration Stack and the integration stack components are ready to use. "
> When complete? Once installed?
>  - In Warning "The IDE changes do not take effect until the IDE is restarted and the IDE may be unstable until it is restarted. "
> Kind of awkward as IDE is repeated x3 and restarted is there twice. Maybe:
> The IDE changes are not applied until it is restarted. The IDE may be unstable until it is restarted and the changes take effect.
> *Chapter 6*
>  - The sub-steps here could use a full stop based on the IBM style guide pp84-85.
>  - Same Warning as in previous chapter
> *Chapter 7*
>  - Same point about the sub-steps and full stops. Some have them here, some don't.
>  - Before the last Important is missing a full stop. "For plug-in specific configuration information, see the appropriate Red Hat JBoss product documentation available from the Red Hat Customer Portal"
> *Chapter 8*
>  - Several steps throughout the procedure are missing full stops at the end.
>  - Step 2 "optional" should probably be capitalized. I'm not 100% sure of this, but it seems awkward being lower case at the beginning of a step.
>    - Same as above with Step 6, which is also missing the opening bracket.
>  - Same Warning as in Chapters 5 and 6.



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