[jopr-commits] JOPR SVN: r1147 - docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US.

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Author: smeehan
Date: 2009-09-02 20:09:50 -0400 (Wed, 02 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 1147

Modified:
   docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/Book_Info.xml
   docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/Chapter.xml
   docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/What_is_JBoss_ON.xml
Log:
Edits to What is JBoss ON

Modified: docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/Book_Info.xml
===================================================================
--- docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2009-09-03 00:08:43 UTC (rev 1146)
+++ docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/Book_Info.xml	2009-09-03 00:09:50 UTC (rev 1147)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 	<productname>JBoss Operations Network</productname>
 	<productnumber>2.3</productnumber>
 	<edition>1</edition>
-	<pubsnumber>0</pubsnumber>
+	<pubsnumber>2</pubsnumber>
 	<abstract>
 		<para>An overview of the functions and components of JBoss Operations Network (JBoss ON)</para>
 	</abstract>

Modified: docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/Chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/Chapter.xml	2009-09-03 00:08:43 UTC (rev 1146)
+++ docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/Chapter.xml	2009-09-03 00:09:50 UTC (rev 1147)
@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@
 <chapter id="What_is_JBoss_ON-Test">
 	<title>JBoss Operations Network overview</title>
 	<para>
-		The JBoss Operations Network (ON) management platform delivers centralized systems management for the JBoss Enterprise Middleware product suite. This allows you to perform the following actions:
+		The JBoss Operations Network (ON) management platform delivers centralized systems management for the JBoss Enterprise Middleware product suite. JBoss ON allows you to perform the following actions:
 	</para>
 	
 	<itemizedlist>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
-	      Coordinate the many stages of an application life-cycle datasources and messaging services
+	      Coordinate the many stages of an application's life-cycle datasources and messaging services
 	    </para>
 	  </listitem>
 	  <listitem> 
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 		
 		<formalpara>
 		  <title>Inventory</title>
-		  <para>Automated discovery services find running inventory systems and allow for easy and quick setup of the product. Inventory information includes deployment information, versions and historical tracking. This model allows you to track machines and operating systems, datasources and messaging services, server processes such as JBoss Application Server, Apache HTTP Server, and detailed service deployments including Enterprise Java Beans(EJB).</para>
+		  <para>Automated discovery services find running inventory systems and allow for quick and easy setup of the product. Inventory information includes deployment information, versions and historical tracking. This model allows you to track machines and operating systems, datasources and messaging services, server processes such as JBoss Application Server, Apache HTTP Server, and detailed service deployments including Enterprise Java Beans(EJB).</para>
 		</formalpara>
 		
 		<formalpara>

Modified: docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/What_is_JBoss_ON.xml
===================================================================
--- docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/What_is_JBoss_ON.xml	2009-09-03 00:08:43 UTC (rev 1146)
+++ docs/enterprise/JON/2.3/What_is_JBoss_ON/en-US/What_is_JBoss_ON.xml	2009-09-03 00:09:50 UTC (rev 1147)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
 ]>
 
-<book>
+<book status="draft">
 	<xi:include href="Book_Info.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	<xi:include href="Preface.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	<xi:include href="Chapter.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />