[richfaces-svn-commits] JBoss Rich Faces SVN: r2092 - trunk/samples/richfaces-demo/src/main/webapp/richfaces/actionparam.

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Author: smukhina
Date: 2007-08-07 05:27:31 -0400 (Tue, 07 Aug 2007)
New Revision: 2092

Modified:
   trunk/samples/richfaces-demo/src/main/webapp/richfaces/actionparam/usage.xhtml
Log:
http://jira.jboss.com/jira/browse/RF-524
Language correction in richfaces-demo for aj4 components

Modified: trunk/samples/richfaces-demo/src/main/webapp/richfaces/actionparam/usage.xhtml
===================================================================
--- trunk/samples/richfaces-demo/src/main/webapp/richfaces/actionparam/usage.xhtml	2007-08-07 09:18:49 UTC (rev 2091)
+++ trunk/samples/richfaces-demo/src/main/webapp/richfaces/actionparam/usage.xhtml	2007-08-07 09:27:31 UTC (rev 2092)
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@
 			 }
 			</style>
 			
-			<p>a4j:actionparam is a component that combains together the functionality of f:param and ActionListener. 
-			Additional to the f:param, this component allows to assign the value to the property of the manager bean
-			directly using assignTo attribute. 
+			<p>a4j:actionparam is a component that combines together the functionality of f:param and ActionListener. 
+			Additionally to the f:param, this component allows to assign the value to the property of the manager bean
+			directly using the assignTo attribute. 
 			</p>
 			<div class="sample-container">
 				<h:form>
@@ -36,9 +36,9 @@
 			</div>
 			<p>
 			You can use a4j:param not only with ajax components, but with non-ajax command component also.
-			In the following example, the used skin of the demo is changed when the full page is refreshed
-			with regular non-ajax h:commandLink. Using this feature, you can update model values without
-			invoking even single line of java code on the server side.
+			In the following example, the used skin of the demo is changed when the whole page is refreshed
+			with the regular non-ajax h:commandLink. Using this feature you can update model values without
+			invoking even a single line of java code on the server side.
 			</p>
 			<div class="sample-container">
 				<h:form>
@@ -58,14 +58,14 @@
 			</div>
 			<p>Attributes 'name' and 'value' are mandatory. You can specify the converter with 'converter' 
 			attribute if you need to convert the value before the model is updates. Note that 
-			the property is assigned with parameter's value on the UPDATE_MODEL phase. So, if
+			the property is assigned with a parameter value on the UPDATE_MODEL phase. Thus, if
 			the validation of the form is failed, this phase will be skipped and the property
 			is not updated.
 			</p>
-			<p>It is possible to use javascript variable of custom function for 'value' attribute. In this
+			<p>It is possible to use javascript variable of custom function for the 'value' attribute. In this
 			case the 'noEscape' attribute should be set to true. When noEscape="true", the 'value' can contain
 			any javascript expression or javascript function invocation and the result of them will be send 
-			to the server as a value of a4j:actionparam. For following example demonstrate how to assign 
+			to the server as a value of a4j:actionparam. The following example demonstrates how to assign 
 			the backing bean with browser screen size values.
 			</p>
 			<div class="sample-container">
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
 			</div>
 		</ui:define>
 		<ui:define name="sources">
-				Here is a fragment of page sources for the given example:
+				Here is a part of page sources for the given example:
 				<iframe src="${facesContext.externalContext.requestContextPath}/richfaces/actionparam/source/usage.html" class="source_frame"/>
 		</ui:define>
 	</ui:composition>