[richfaces-svn-commits] JBoss Rich Faces SVN: r2654 - trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included.

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Fri Aug 31 09:40:48 EDT 2007 

Author: smukhina
Date: 2007-08-31 09:40:47 -0400 (Fri, 31 Aug 2007)
New Revision: 2654

Modified:
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/effect.xml
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/messages.desc.xml
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/messages.xml
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/push.xml
Log:
http://jira.jboss.com/jira/browse/RF-398
some spelling mistakes are corrected

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/effect.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/effect.xml	2007-08-31 12:58:25 UTC (rev 2653)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/effect.xml	2007-08-31 13:40:47 UTC (rev 2654)
@@ -130,14 +130,13 @@
     </figure>
 
 <para>
-<emphasis><property>&quot;name&quot;</property></emphasis> attribute defines a name of the JavaScript function will
-be generated on the page when the component is rendered. You can invoke this function to activate the effect. The function accesses one parameter.
+<emphasis><property>&quot;name&quot;</property></emphasis> attribute defines a name of the JavaScript function that is
+be generated on a page when the component is rendered. You can invoke this function to activate the effect. The function accesses one parameter.
 It is a set of effect options in JSON format. 
 </para> 
 
 <para>
-<emphasis><property>&quot;type&quot;</property></emphasis> attribute defines the type of an effect. For example, "Fade", "Blind", "Opacity". Have a look at <ulink url="http://script.aculo.us">scriptaculous documentation</ulink>
-for set of available effect. 
+<emphasis><property>&quot;type&quot;</property></emphasis> attribute defines the type of an effect. For example, "Fade", "Blind", "Opacity". Have a look at <ulink url="http://script.aculo.us">scriptaculous documentation</ulink> for set of available effect. 
 </para>
 
 <para>

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/messages.desc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/messages.desc.xml	2007-08-31 12:58:25 UTC (rev 2653)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/messages.desc.xml	2007-08-31 13:40:47 UTC (rev 2654)
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@
         <title>Key Features</title>
         <itemizedlist>
             <listitem>Highly customizable look and feel</listitem>
-            <listitem>Track both traditional and ajax based requests</listitem>
-            <listitem>Optional tooltip to display the detail portion of the messages</listitem>
+            <listitem>Track both traditional and Ajax based requests</listitem>
+            <listitem>Optional tooltip to display a detailed part of the messages</listitem>
             <listitem>Additionally customizable via attributes and facets</listitem>
-            <listitem>Additionally provides of  three parts to be optionally defined: marker, label and header</listitem>
+            <listitem>Additionally provides of three parts to be optionally defined: marker, label and header</listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
     </section>
 </section>

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/messages.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/messages.xml	2007-08-31 12:58:25 UTC (rev 2653)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/messages.xml	2007-08-31 13:40:47 UTC (rev 2654)
@@ -78,23 +78,23 @@
           request automatically without outputPanel usage.</listitem>
         <listitem>The component optionally provides &quot;passed&quot; state which will be
           shown if no message to be displayed.</listitem>
-        <listitem>Provides possibility to add some marker to message. By default marker element
+        <listitem>Provides possibility to add some marker to message. By default, a marker element
           isn&apos;t shown.</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </para>
-    <para>Component provides three parts to be optionally defined: marker, informational label
-      before the marker for the every message and header element placed before the messages list.
+    <para>The component provides three parts to be optionally defined: marker, informational label
+      before the marker for every message and header element placed before the messages list.
       Header and marker are optional. They don&apos;t present by default for compatibility with standard
       messages. Labels are displayed for errors and one passed label is displayed optionally (if it&apos;s
       defined) when no errors occured.</para>
-    <para> Set of facet which can be used for marker defining: <itemizedlist>
+    <para> Set of facet which can be used for a marker defining: <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>header. This facet defines additional content to be displayed near the list. Header is positioned on top of the messages component.</listitem>
-      <listitem>passedHeader. This facet is provided to allow end developer set a header content to be displayed if there are no messages.</listitem>
-      <listitem>passedMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there is no message.</listitem>
-      <listitem>errorMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there is a message with a severity class of &quot;ERROR&quot;.</listitem>
-      <listitem>fatalMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there is a message with a severity class of &quot;FATAL&quot;.</listitem>
-      <listitem>infoMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there is a message with a severity class of &quot;INFO&quot;.</listitem>
-      <listitem>warnMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there is an message with a severity class of &quot;WARN&quot;.</listitem>
+      <listitem>passedHeader. This facet is provided to allow an end developer setting a header content to be displayed if there are no messages.</listitem>
+      <listitem>passedMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to be displayed if there is no message.</listitem>
+      <listitem>errorMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to be displayed if there is a message with a severity class of &quot;ERROR&quot;.</listitem>
+      <listitem>fatalMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to be displayed if there is a message with a severity class of &quot;FATAL&quot;.</listitem>
+      <listitem>infoMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to be displayed if there is a message with a severity class of &quot;INFO&quot;.</listitem>
+      <listitem>warnMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to be displayed if there is an message with a severity class of &quot;WARN&quot;.</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </para>
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
     <para>To redefine appearance of all <emphasis role="bold">
         <property>&lt;rich:messages&gt;</property>
       </emphasis> components, you may define the properties of the predefined style classes in the
-      common CSS style sheet used on the page (there are no skin parameters and predefined values by
+      common CSS style sheet used on a page (there are no skin parameters and predefined values by
       default to make it compatible with the standard message component). </para>
   </section>
 
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
       </emphasis> components on a page using CSS, it&apos;s enough to create classes with the
       same names and define the necessary properties in them.</para>
 
-    <para>To change the style of particular <emphasis role="bold">
+    <para>To change the style of a particular <emphasis role="bold">
         <property>&lt;rich:messages&gt;</property>
     </emphasis> components define your own style classes in the corresponding <emphasis role="bold">
       <property>&lt;rich:messages&gt;</property>

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/push.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/push.xml	2007-08-31 12:58:25 UTC (rev 2653)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/push.xml	2007-08-31 13:40:47 UTC (rev 2654)
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
 </para>
 <para>
 'interval' - Interval (in ms) for call push requests. Default value 1000 (1 sec).
-<!-- If "0" a connection is permanent. Also user can set different value for parameter 'timeout'. -->
+<!-- If "0" a connection is permanent. Also you can set different value for parameter 'timeout'. -->
 </para>
 <para>
 Code for registration of listener:

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