[richfaces-svn-commits] JBoss Rich Faces SVN: r11781 - trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included.

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Author: smukhina
Date: 2008-12-15 10:50:52 -0500 (Mon, 15 Dec 2008)
New Revision: 11781

Modified:
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/inputNumberSlider.desc.xml
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/inputNumberSlider.xml
Log:
https://jira.jboss.org/jira/browse/RF-5387 -InputNumberSlider extended component description, language is checked 

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/inputNumberSlider.desc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/inputNumberSlider.desc.xml	2008-12-15 15:48:29 UTC (rev 11780)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/inputNumberSlider.desc.xml	2008-12-15 15:50:52 UTC (rev 11781)
@@ -14,9 +14,7 @@
 </sectioninfo>
 <section>
 <title>Description</title>
-    <para>The component extending standard component <emphasis role="bold">
-          <property>&lt;rich:inputNumberSlider&gt;</property>
-        </emphasis>.A component that lets selecting a number from a numeric region. It&apos;s a horizontal 
+    <para>The component lets selecting a number from a numeric region. It&apos;s a horizontal 
     aligned scroll-like control with its own input field (optional) present. The keyboard input in a
      field is possible (optional). Also it&apos;s possible to see the current value in the toolTip
       above a dragged handle control.</para>
@@ -40,7 +38,7 @@
         <listitem><para>Optional manual input possible if a text input field is present</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>Validation of manual input</para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>Possibility to display 2 controls that increase/decrease the value by the defined step width, when they will be clicked.</para></listitem>
-        <listitem><para>Attribute &quot;orientation&quot; that can have the values &quot;vertical&quot; and &quot;horizontal&quot; to define in which direction the slider should be moveable.
+        <listitem><para>Attribute &quot;orientation&quot; that can have the values &quot;vertical&quot; and &quot;horizontal&quot; to define in which direction the slider should be movable.
         </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 </section>

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/inputNumberSlider.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/inputNumberSlider.xml	2008-12-15 15:48:29 UTC (rev 11780)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/inputNumberSlider.xml	2008-12-15 15:50:52 UTC (rev 11781)
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
 		</para>
 		<programlisting role="XML"><![CDATA[<rich:inputNumberSlider></rich:inputNumberSlider>]]></programlisting>
 
-		<para>It generates on a page:</para>
+		<para>It's generated on a page:</para>
 		<figure>
 			<title>
 				Generated
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
 			<emphasis role="bold">Example:</emphasis>
 		</para>
 		<programlisting role="XML"><![CDATA[<rich:inputNumberSlider minValue="1"  maxValue="100" showInput="false"/>]]></programlisting>
-		<para>It looks at page like:</para>
+		<para>It's displayed at a page like:</para>
 		<figure>
 			<title>
 				<emphasis role="bold">
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@
 			</emphasis>
 			attribute provides an association between a component, and
 			the message that the component (indirectly) produced. This
-			attribute defines the parameters of localized error and
+			attribute defines the parameters of a  localized error and
 			informational messages that occur as a result of conversion,
 			validation, or other application actions during the request
 			processing lifecycle. With the help of this attribute you
@@ -263,8 +263,8 @@
             </emphasis>
             attribute (default is &quot;false&quot;)
 		  possible to display 2 controls that increase/decrease the value by the 
-		  defined step width, when they will be clicked. When the mouse will click and press, 
-		  the pointer will move with the delay set in miliseconds in<emphasis>
+		  defined step width, when they are clicked. When the mouse button is clicked and pressed, 
+		  the pointer is moved with a delay set in miliseconds in<emphasis>
                 <property>&quot;delay&quot;</property>
             </emphasis> attribute.
 		</para>
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@
                               showArrows="true" 
                               delay="150"/>
         ]]></programlisting>
-        <para>It looks at page like:</para>
+        <para>It's displayed at page like:</para>
         <figure>
             <title>
                 <emphasis role="bold">