[richfaces-svn-commits] JBoss Rich Faces SVN: r5528 - trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included.

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Author: smukhina
Date: 2008-01-22 06:05:20 -0500 (Tue, 22 Jan 2008)
New Revision: 5528

Modified:
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/message.desc.xml
   trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/message.xml
Log:
http://jira.jboss.com/jira/browse/RF-568 - language is corrected

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/message.desc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/message.desc.xml	2008-01-22 08:44:45 UTC (rev 5527)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/message.desc.xml	2008-01-22 11:05:20 UTC (rev 5528)
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     </sectioninfo>
     <section>
         <title>Description</title>
-        <para>The component used for rendering a single message for a specific component. </para>
+        <para>The component is used for rendering a single message for a specific component. </para>
         <figure>
             <title>&lt;rich:message&gt; component</title>
             <mediaobject>
@@ -21,10 +21,10 @@
         <title>Key Features</title>
         <itemizedlist>
             <listitem>Highly customizable look and feel </listitem>
-            <listitem>Track both traditional and Ajax based requests</listitem>
+            <listitem>Tracking both traditional and Ajax based requests</listitem>
             <listitem>Optional toolTip to display the detail portion of the message</listitem>
-            <listitem>Additionally customizable via attributes and facets</listitem>
-            <listitem>Additionally provides of two parts to be optionally defined: marker and
+            <listitem>Additionally customizable with attributes and facets</listitem>
+            <listitem>Additionally provides two parts to be optionally defined: marker and
             label</listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
     </section>

Modified: trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/message.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/message.xml	2008-01-22 08:44:45 UTC (rev 5527)
+++ trunk/docs/userguide/en/src/main/docbook/included/message.xml	2008-01-22 11:05:20 UTC (rev 5528)
@@ -76,30 +76,29 @@
       </emphasis>component except next two features: <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>It's ajaxRendered. It means that the component is reRendered after Ajax request
           automatically without outputPanel usage</listitem>
-        <listitem>The component optionally provides "passed" state which will be shown if no message
-          to be displayed</listitem>
-        <listitem>Provides possibility to add some marker to message. By default marker element
+        <listitem>The component optionally provides "passed" state which will be shown if no message is displayed</listitem>
+        <listitem>Provides possibility to add some marker to message. By default  a marker element
           isn't shown</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </para>
-    <para> Set of facet which can be used for marker defining: <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>passedMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if
+    <para> A set of facets which can be used for marker defining: <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>passedMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to display if
           there is no message</listitem>
-        <listitem>errorMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there
+        <listitem>errorMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to display if there
           is a message with a severity class of "ERROR"</listitem>
-        <listitem>fatalMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there
+        <listitem>fatalMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to display if there
           is a message with a severity class of "FATAL"</listitem>
-        <listitem>infoMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there
+        <listitem>infoMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to display if there
           is a message with a severity class of "INFO"</listitem>
-        <listitem>warnMarker. This facet is provided to allow set a marker to be displayed if there
-          is an message with a severity class of "WARN"</listitem>
+        <listitem>warnMarker. This facet is provided to allow setting a marker to display if there
+          is a message with a severity class of "WARN"</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </para>
 
-    <para> The following example shows different variants of customization of the component. The
-      attribute 'passedLabel' is used for definition the label to be displayed when no message
-      appears. But the message component isn't appears before the form submission even with passed
-      state defined (on initial rendering).Boolean attribute<emphasis><property> &quot;showSummary&quot; </property></emphasis>defines possibility to
+    <para> The following example shows different variants for component customization. The
+      attribute 'passedLabel' is used for definition of the label to display when no message
+      appears. But the message component doesn't appear before the form submission even when 
+      state is defined as passed (on initial rendering). Boolean attribute<emphasis><property> &quot;showSummary&quot; </property></emphasis>defines possibility to
       display summary portion of displayed messages. The facets "errorMarker" and 'passedMarker' set
       corresponding images for markers. </para>