Author: jaredmorgs Date: 2013-01-30 01:22:19 -0500 (Wed, 30 Jan 2013) New Revision: 9098 Modified: epp/docs/branches/6.0/Reference_Guide/en-US/modules/AuthenticationAndIdentity/LDAP.xml Log: BZ#856453 - Committed minor peer review comments from Tomas K into the guide. Have not restaged guide. Changes will be visible when other changes are made and restaged. Modified: epp/docs/branches/6.0/Reference_Guide/en-US/modules/AuthenticationAndIdentity/LDAP.xml =================================================================== --- epp/docs/branches/6.0/Reference_Guide/en-US/modules/AuthenticationAndIdentity/LDAP.xml 2013-01-30 05:07:43 UTC (rev 9097) +++ epp/docs/branches/6.0/Reference_Guide/en-US/modules/AuthenticationAndIdentity/LDAP.xml 2013-01-30 06:22:19 UTC (rev 9098) @@ -48,9 +48,6 @@ <para> If you are using a third party directory server (<application>OpenDS</application>, <application>OpenLDAP</application> or <application>Microsoft Active Directory</application>), refer to the appropriate documentation for that product. </para> - <para> - These, and other appropriate settings, should be adjusted to suit your circumstances. - </para> </step> <step> <para> @@ -66,7 +63,7 @@ <section id="sect-Reference_Guide_eXo_JCR_1.14-LDAP_Integration-LDAP_in_Read-only_Mode"> <title>LDAP in Read-only Mode</title> <para>If LDAP is configured to operate in read-write mode, changes to user and group information made in the portal platform is written back to the directory server. </para> - <para>If LDAP is operating in read-only mode. existing user and group information is consumed from the directory server, and all new user data entries created using the Portal User Interface are stored in the portal database. </para> + <para>If LDAP is operating in read-only mode, existing user and group information is consumed from the directory server, and all new user data entries created using the Portal User Interface are stored in the portal database. </para> <para>The only exception is that passwords updated through the user interface will also be propagated into the appropriate LDAP entry. </para> <procedure id="proc-LDAP-LDAP_read-only_Mode">