[aerogear-dev] Updated wording for the staging site

[Jay Balunas]

On Sep 21, 2012, at 9:03 AM, Jay Balunas wrote:

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> On Sep 21, 2012, at 8:53 AM, Lucas Holmquist wrote:
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>> On Sep 21, 2012, at 8:49 AM, Kris Borchers <kris at redhat.com> wrote:
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>>> On Sep 21, 2012, at 7:41 AM, Jay Balunas <jbalunas at redhat.com> wrote:
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>>>> On Sep 20, 2012, at 11:45 PM, Glen Daniels wrote:
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>>>>> Wow, that's a lot to pack into a tag line, Jay. :)
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>>>> yup :-)
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>>>>> 
>>>>> Hm.  "The AeroGear Project: Open-source tools for mobile developers.
>>>>> Simple, secure connectivity to your backend."  ("Project" implies we're
>>>>> still building it?)
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>>>> I like this approach.
>>> 
>>> My only problem with this one, and any tagline trying to fit everything you want to convey Jay, is that the tagline, a button and the image need to fit on a mobile device screen. They do flip to a vertical orientation but that's pretty long. I think simple is going to be better here. I don't think we need to spell out every bit of the project in a tagline, just it's essence  … that's what the rest of the home page is for. :)
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>> +1  see my previous email,  tag line was "Mobile, your way"   
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> I know we're not going to fit everything in a tag line, but I think a few words on the project would be good :-)
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> If we shorten the above to something like "Open-source (tools or libraries or projects) for mobile developers"  Maybe adding "Simple, secure connectivity ( "your way" or "" or "to your backend")

Lets finalize this at tomorrows meeting along with any last minute changes and we should be good to launch!

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>>>>> --Glen
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>>>>> On 9/20/12 5:04 PM, Jay Balunas wrote:
>>>>>> Hi All,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Trying to work out the new wording for the tagline on the front page
>>>>>> of the site.  Right now it says "JBoss Focused Resources for Mobile
>>>>>> and HTML5".
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Couple issues with that.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 1) We don't want to lead off with "JBOSS" as the client libraries are
>>>>>> really for the native developers (web, hybrid, native(ios, android)).
>>>>>> The server impl should not be first word.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 2) It is not very descriptive about what or why developers would want
>>>>>> to use AeroGear.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> A few points:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> * Libs are "your way" so maybe something something like "Access to
>>>>>> secure persistence the way you expect it".
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> * There is more to come.  So if we can work in some wording or
>>>>>> impression that this is just the beginning...
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> * Not just JBoss AS as the backend, but cloud based with openshift,
>>>>>> and even using ruby
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> * Cordova and hybrid should be mentioned - its an important part of
>>>>>> our eventual plans, and it not in the graphic
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> * HTML5 is important, but could almost be assumed when talking about
>>>>>> mobile web
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> * our libs are handling the plumbing, making it easier to develop
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Any idea's out there for a good way to put this together for a tag
>>>>>> line?  I'll think on it more and post some ideas too...
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> -Jay _______________________________________________ aerogear-dev
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