[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (TOOLSDOC-418) Awkward wording in section section 1.1
Len DiMaggio created TOOLSDOC-418:
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Summary: Awkward wording in section section 1.1
Key: TOOLSDOC-418
URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TOOLSDOC-418
Project: Documentation for JBoss Tools and Developer Studio
Issue Type: Bug
Components: Installation Guide
Environment: Build Name: 22485, Release Notes 7.1.0-7.1-7.1.0
Build Date: 01-11-2013 17:01:22
Topic ID: 22589-550126 [Latest]
Reporter: Len DiMaggio
Assignee: Michelle Murray
Priority: Minor
Title: About Red Hat JBoss Developer Studio
Describe the issue:
This is a minor point, but the wording of this section has always seemed awkward:
{quote}
Furthermore, JBoss Developer Studio has many unique features to assist your application
development:
Develop new applications using the wizards and project examples of JBoss Central.
Add powerful functionality to applications with minimal effort using Forge Tools.
.
.
{quote}
Suggestions for improvement:
Can we change this to:
{quote}
Furthermore, JBoss Developer Studio has many unique features to assist your application
development by enabling you to:
Develop new applications using the wizards and project examples of JBoss Central.
Add powerful functionality to applications with minimal effort using Forge Tools.
{quote}
Additional information:
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