[jbosstools-issues] [JBoss JIRA] (TOOLSDOC-289) Adhering to Red Hat and IBM writing styles
Michelle Murray created TOOLSDOC-289:
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Summary: Adhering to Red Hat and IBM writing styles
Key: TOOLSDOC-289
URL: https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TOOLSDOC-289
Project: Documentation for JBoss Tools and Developer Studio
Issue Type: Bug
Security Level: Public (Everyone can see)
Components: Getting Started Guide
Reporter: Michelle Murray
Assignee: Isaac Rooskov
About: JBDS Getting Started Guide, 5.0.1
Issue: The following do not adhere to the Red Hat or IBM writing styles
[1.1,P2,L2] OS > operating system
[Table1.1,R4,C2] Web pages > web pages
[1.2,P3,L1] just > omit
[3.1.1,P1,L1] you should follow > follow
[3.1.1,B3,L1] Please > omit
[3.1.1,B3,L2] you've > you have
[3.1.1,Note,L3] i.e. > that is
[3.2.2,B2] in a terminal window > on the command line
[3.2.2] you launch JBoss > you start JBoss
[4.2.1,Operating System] reports the Operating System > operating system
[4.2.1,Linux distribution version] as the Operating System > operating system
[5.1,After Fig5.6, P1, L1] go to Section > see Section
[5.2,After Fig5.14,P1,L2] A screen will then appear > A window will then open
[5.2,After Fig5.19,P1,L2] button that appears. > button in the window that opens.
[7.1,After Fig7.3] should now appear > should now be visible
[7.2,B1] right click > right-click the server's name
[7.3,P1,L1] right click > right-click
[7.3,P1,L1] press Stop. > select Stop.
[9,P1,L1] you'll > you will
[9,P2,L1] We'll assume that > It will be assumed that
[9.1,P1,L1] i.e. > that is
[9.1,P1,L2] Thus this section will perform you all necessary steps on how to do this. >
omit?
[9.1,After Fig9.1] should appear > should be visible
[9.2,B1] Right click > Right-click
[9.2.1,P1,L1] Let's now make a little change so that a JSP page displays “Hello
World!” message. > To edit the JSP page so that it displays the “Hello World!” message,
insert the following line inside the <body> </body> tags: ...
[9.2.2,After Fig9.6,P1,L1] Let's add > To add ...:
[9.2.3.1,After Fig9.7] Right click > Right-click
[9.2.3.1,After Fig9.7] select New Archive -> JAR
[9.2.4,B1] e.g. > For example, insert this piece of code
[9.2.5,B2] right click > right-click
[9.2.5,B2] haven't > have not
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