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Misha Ali commented on TOOLSDOC-642:
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Feedback:
1. For FH:
This is a bit better but it should probably be edited so that it flows better. My
suggestion:
Red Hat JBoss Developer Studio includes an Import wizard to allow users to quickly and
easily import previously created FeedHenry applications. Once the application is imported,
you can change or enhance the application, test the changes, and then push it back to the
FeedHenry server.
Sentence one tells you why and sentence two tells you what you can do. Lots of room for
improvement but I would keep it simple and specific.
I'd encourage you to work on the second one based on the feedback above to make it
more concise and specific, as well as to cut down on unnecessary words.
JBDS Articles: draft intro text about why to do a certain thing
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Key: TOOLSDOC-642
URL:
https://issues.jboss.org/browse/TOOLSDOC-642
Project: Documentation for JBoss Tools and Developer Studio
Issue Type: Bug
Components: General documentation issues
Affects Versions: 4.2.3.Final
Reporter: Misha Ali
Assignee: Supriya Bharadwaj
Need intro text about why a user would want to do the thing the article describes.
For example, why would the user want to import a FH app, or why create a HTML5 web app,
etc.
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