Re: [cdi-dev] Need native speaker for CDI-420 (trim) reword

+1 on John:o! Many thanks, Emily =========================== Emily Jiang WebSphere Application Server, CDI Development Lead MP 211, DE3A20, Winchester, Hampshire, England, SO21 2JN Phone: +44 (0)1962 816278 Internal: 246278 Email: emijiang(a)uk.ibm.com Lotus Notes: Emily Jiang/UK/IBM@IBMGB From: John Ament <john.ament(a)spartasystems.com&gt; To: Antoine Sabot-Durand <antoine(a)sabot-durand.net&gt;, CDI Java EE Specification <cdi-dev(a)lists.jboss.org&gt; Date: 18/11/2016 15:54 Subject: Re: [cdi-dev] Need native speaker for CDI-420 (trim) reword Sent by: cdi-dev-bounces(a)lists.jboss.org Here's my take.. "If an explicit bean archive contains the `<trim/>` element in its `beans.xml` file, then for a type to be discovered it must have either a scope annotation (normal or pseudo) or a bean defining annotation (as defined in <<bean_defining_annotations>>)" John From: cdi-dev-bounces(a)lists.jboss.org <cdi-dev-bounces(a)lists.jboss.org&gt; on behalf of Antoine Sabot-Durand <antoine(a)sabot-durand.net&gt; Sent: Friday, November 18, 2016 9:30 AM To: CDI Java EE Specification Subject: [cdi-dev] Need native speaker for CDI-420 (trim) reword Hi all, With Martin, we reword the <trim/> section like: "If an explicit bean archive contains the `<trim/>` element in its `beans.xml` file, types that don't have either a bean defining annotation (as defined in <<bean_defining_annotations>>) or any scope annotation, are removed from the set of discovered types." Grammar feedback from native speaker is most welcome. Antoine NOTICE: This e-mail message and any attachments may contain confidential, proprietary, and/or privileged information which should be treated accordingly. If you are not the intended recipient, please notify the sender immediately by return e-mail, delete this message, and destroy all physical and electronic copies. Thank you. _______________________________________________ cdi-dev mailing list cdi-dev(a)lists.jboss.org https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/cdi-dev Note that for all code provided on this list, the provider licenses the code under the Apache License, Version 2 ( http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0.html). For all other ideas provided on this list, the provider waives all patent and other intellectual property rights inherent in such information. Unless stated otherwise above: IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with number 741598. Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6 3AU