Author: smukhina
Date: 2007-09-17 08:48:30 -0400 (Mon, 17 Sep 2007)
New Revision: 3650
Modified:
trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/DevelopAsimpleJSPWebApplication.xml
Log:
http://jira.jboss.com/jira/browse/RHDS-160
language is corrected
Modified:
trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/DevelopAsimpleJSPWebApplication.xml
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---
trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/DevelopAsimpleJSPWebApplication.xml 2007-09-17
12:43:03 UTC (rev 3649)
+++
trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/DevelopAsimpleJSPWebApplication.xml 2007-09-17
12:48:30 UTC (rev 3650)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<chapter id="DevelopASimpleWebApplication"
xreflabel="DevelopASimpleWebApplication">
- <?dbhtml filename="DevelopASimpleWebApplication.html"?>
+<chapter id="DevelopingASimpleWebApplication"
xreflabel="DevelopingASimpleWebApplication">
+ <?dbhtml filename="DevelopingASimpleWebApplication.html"?>
<chapterinfo>
<keywordset>
<keyword>Red Hat Developer Studio</keyword>
@@ -8,16 +8,16 @@
<keyword>JBoss</keyword>
</keywordset>
</chapterinfo>
- <title>Develop a simple JSP web application</title>
- <para>In this chapter we are going to show you how to create a simple JSP
application using the Red Hat Developer Studio. The application will show a classic
"Hello World!" on the page.</para>
- <para>We'll assume that you have already launched Red Hat Developer
Studio installed and
+ <title>Developing a simple JSP web application</title>
+ <para>In this you'll find out how to create a simple JSP application using the
Red Hat Developer Studio. The application will show a classic "Hello
World!" on the page.</para>
+ <para>We'll assume that you have already launched Red Hat Developer
Studio and
also that the Red Hat perspective is the current perspective. (If not, make it active by
selecting <emphasis>Window/Open Perspective/Red Hat Developer
Studio</emphasis> from the menu bar or by selecting <emphasis>Window/
Open Perspective/Other...</emphasis> from the menu bar and then selecting Red Hat
Developer Studio from
the Select Perspective dialog box.)</para>
<section id="SettingUpTheProject">
<?dbhtml filename="SettingUpTheProject.html"?>
<title>Setting Up the Project</title>
- <para>We are first going to create a new project for the
application.</para>
+ <para>At first a new project for the application will be created.</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem><para>Go to the menu bar and select
<emphasis>File/New/Project...</emphasis></para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Select <emphasis>Web/Dynamic Web
Project</emphasis> in the New Project dialog box</para></listitem>
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
<section id="CreatingJSPPage">
<?dbhtml filename="CreatingJSPPage.html"?>
<title>Creating JSP Page</title>
- <para>In our simple application we need to create only one JSP page which will
display a "Hello World!" message.</para>
+ <para>In our simple application we need to create only one JSP page which
displays a "Hello World!" message.</para>
<orderedlist continuation="continues">
<listitem><para>Right click <emphasis>WebContent > New >
JSP.</emphasis></para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Type "hello.jsp" for file name and click
Next button.</para></listitem>
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@
<para>Our hello.jsp page will now appear in Project Explorer.</para>
<section id="EditingJSPPage">
<?dbhtml filename="EditingJSPPage.html"?>
- <title>Editing JSP Page</title>
- <para>Let's now make a little change so that jsp page displays
"Hello World!" message.</para>
+ <title>Editing a JSP Page</title>
+ <para>Let's now make a little change so that a jsp page displays
"Hello World!" message.</para>
<orderedlist continuation="continues">
<listitem><para>Insert this line inside the <emphasis
role="bold"><property><body></property></emphasis><emphasis
role="bold"><property></body></property></emphasis>
tag:
</para></listitem>
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
<programlisting role="XML"><![CDATA[<% out.println("Hello
World!"); %>]]>
</programlisting>
-<para>Notice that content assist is always available when you are
typing:</para>
+<para>Notice that content assist functionality is always available when you are
typing:</para>
<figure>
<title>Content Assist in JSP page</title>
<mediaobject>
@@ -129,8 +129,8 @@
<section id="DeployTheProject">
<?dbhtml filename="DeployTheProject.html"?>
- <title>Deploy the project</title>
- <para>While creating any web project one is usually experiencing a pain writing
ant scripts and managing the
+ <title>Deploying the project</title>
+ <para>While creating any web project you could experience a pain writing ant
scripts and managing the
packaging even if a developer is writing the most trivial web applications. With Red Hat
Developer Studio you are saved from such a pain. All you need is start JBoss server and
launch your application in your favorite browser.</para>
<para>You can also create a war archive with RHDS's Archive Tools
and export it to any web server.</para>
<section id="WarConfig">
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
<section id="LaunchingTheProject">
<?dbhtml filename="LaunchingTheProject.html"?>
<title>Launch JSP Project</title>
- <para>Let's now launch our project on server. We'll be using
JBoss server that ships with Red Hat Developer Studio.</para>
+ <para>Let's now launch our project on server. We'll use JBoss
server that is shiped with Red Hat Developer Studio.</para>
<orderedlist continuation="continues">
<listitem><para>Start JBoss server from JBoss Server view by clicking the
Start icon.</para></listitem>
</orderedlist>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
<orderedlist continuation="continues">
-<listitem><para>Click the Run icon or right click your project folder and
select <emphasis>Run on Server</emphasis>. If you haven't made any
changes in web.xml file or cleared it out you can launch the application by right clicking
the hello.jsp page and selecting <emphasis>Run on
Server</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Click the Run icon or right click your project folder and
select <emphasis>Run on Server</emphasis>. If you haven't made any
changes in web.xml file or cleared it out you can launch the application by right clicking
the hello.jsp page and selecting <emphasis>Run on the
Server</emphasis>.</para></listitem>
</orderedlist>
<figure>
<title>Run project</title>
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>You should see in browser the next page:</para>
+ <para>You should see the next page in a browser :</para>
<figure>
<title>Running project</title>
<mediaobject>