Author: smukhina Date: 2009-04-25 18:27:33 -0400 (Sat, 25 Apr 2009) New Revision: 13877 Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/hiw.xml trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/intro.xml Log: RF-5768 - English is checked Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/hiw.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/hiw.xml 2009-04-25 16:01:30 UTC (rev 13876) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/hiw.xml 2009-04-25 22:27:33 UTC (rev 13877) @@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ <title>Building the control with &lt;rich:inputNumberSlider&gt;</title> <para> The <emphasis role="bold"><property>rich:inputNumberSlider</property></emphasis> component in the Photo Album Demo is used as a control that helps a user to change photos size while previewing an album. - A handler position on the slider track corresponds to a particular value of image size. + A handler position on the slider track corresponds to a particular value of an image size. The component is included into the page with the help of <emphasis role="bold"><property>ui:include</property></emphasis>: </para> <programlisting role="XML"><![CDATA[... @@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ ...]]></programlisting> <para> - When the <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;rich:inputNumberSlider&lt;</property></emphasis> is rendered at first its default value for image size is 120 px. + When the <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;rich:inputNumberSlider&lt;</property></emphasis> is rendered, at first its default value for image size is 120 px. </para> <figure> Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml 2009-04-25 16:01:30 UTC (rev 13876) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml 2009-04-25 22:27:33 UTC (rev 13877) @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ <ulink url="https://anonsvn.jboss.org/repos/richfaces/management/design/rea... </para> <para> - In order to document key concepts and conceptual representation of data of the <property>Photo Album Demo</property> application the Entity Relation Diagram (ERD) is created. + In order to document the key concepts and conceptual representation of data of the <property>Photo Album Demo</property> application the Entity Relation Diagram (ERD) is created. The diagram also identifies the relationships among all major entities within the system and their significant methods and attributes. It provides a structural view of the system that can be complemented by other dynamic views in use case models. </para> @@ -69,8 +69,8 @@ </para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para>Create a new project directory on your hard disk;</para></listitem> - <listitem><para>Browse to the directory with the archetype (<code>richfaces\cdk\maven-archetype-seam-app</code>), switch to command line and type the next command <code>mvn install</code> to install the archetype in your repository;</para></listitem> - <listitem><para>Then browse to your project directory and type in command line</para> + <listitem><para>Browse to the directory with the archetype (<code>richfaces\cdk\maven-archetype-seam-app</code>), switch to the command line and type the next command <code>mvn install</code> to install the archetype in your repository;</para></listitem> + <listitem><para>Then browse to your project directory and type in the command line</para> <para><code>mvn archetype:generate </code></para> <para><code>-DarchetypeGroupId=org.richfaces.cdk </code></para> <para><code>-DarchetypeArtifactId=maven-archetype-seam-app </code></para> @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ </itemizedlist> <para> - The EJB module contains the entity diagram classes and the classes for interaction with database. The structure of EJB module is illustrated below: + The EJB module contains the entity diagram classes and the classes for interaction with a database. The structure of EJB module is illustrated below: </para> <figure> @@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Since the Photo Album Demo uses Facelets technology the main page <code>index.xhtml</code> represents an &lt;include&gt; (or facelet) wrapped with the <emphasis role="bold">&lt;ui:composition&gt;</emphasis> tag. + <para>Since the Photo Album Demo uses the Facelets technology the main page <code>index.xhtml</code> represents an &lt;include&gt; (or facelet) wrapped with the <emphasis role="bold">&lt;ui:composition&gt;</emphasis> tag. This tag is used to trim unnecessary markup in the facelet. Any content outside of <emphasis role="bold">&lt;ui:composition&gt;</emphasis> tag is ignored by the Facelets view handler. A facelet can be incorporated into another page or facelet with the help of <emphasis role="bold">&lt;ui:define&gt;</emphasis> and <emphasis role="bold">&lt;ui:include&gt;</emphasis> tags pointed to by the <emphasis role="bold">&lt;ui:include&gt;</emphasis> &quot;src&quot; attribute. Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/intro.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/intro.xml 2009-04-25 16:01:30 UTC (rev 13876) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/intro.xml 2009-04-25 22:27:33 UTC (rev 13877) @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ It provides social services for uploading photos, storing and previewing them, creating your own albums and sharing them with other users, searching albums, photos or users, managing the environment. - Newcomers or not registered users can navigate through other users shelves and albums + Newcomers or not registered users can navigate through other users' shelves and albums in &quot;Anonymous mode&quot;, but in this case no possibilities to create personal shelves or albums or upload photos are available. </para> @@ -29,13 +29,13 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - <emphasis>built-in Ajax capability</emphasis> - the <property>RichFaces</property> offers + <emphasis>Built-in Ajax capability</emphasis> - the <property>RichFaces</property> offers both component-wide and very flexible page-wide Ajax support with no need to write any JavaScript code; </para> </listitem> <listitem> <para> - <emphasis>highly customizable look-and-feel</emphasis> - the <property>RichFaces</property> have special feature called + <emphasis>Highly customizable look-and-feel</emphasis> - the <property>RichFaces</property> have special feature called <ulink url="http://www.jboss.org/file-access/default/members/jbossrichfaces...;. </para> </listitem>