Author: smukhina Date: 2009-11-04 07:16:48 -0500 (Wed, 04 Nov 2009) New Revision: 18405 Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/creating_new_seam.xml Log: https://jira.jboss.org/jira/browse/JBDS-906 spelling is checked of the chapter Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/creating_new_seam.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/creating_new_seam.xml 2009-11-04 12:15:14 UTC (rev 18404) +++ trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/creating_new_seam.xml 2009-11-04 12:16:48 UTC (rev 18405) @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ <title>Creating a New Seam Project via the New Seam Project wizard</title> <para>In this chapter we provide you with the necessary steps to start working with Seam Framework.</para> - <para>At first, we suggest setting the specific Seam perspective that combines a number of + <para>At first, we suggest to set the specific Seam perspective that combines a number of different views and editors needed for work with resources concerned. For that select <emphasis> <property>Window > Open Perspective > Other > Seam</property> @@ -37,8 +37,8 @@ </figure> <section id="standaloneSeam" role="updated"> <title>Create standalone Seam Web Project</title> - <para>The best way to get started with Seam is to organise a simple Seam Project and - experiment with it by creating variations.</para> + <para>The best way to get started with Seam is to create a simple Seam Project and + experiment with it.</para> <para>Thus, you should select <emphasis> <property>File > New > Seam Web Project</property> </emphasis> to run the <property>New Seam Project</property> wizard. The wizard form @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ <property>New...</property> </emphasis> button in the <property>Target Runtime</property> section. It brings up the wizard where you can specify a new JBoss Server Runtime environment or the other type of - runtime appropriate for configuring your project. Let's create one more JBoss 4.2 + runtime appropriate for your project configuration. Let's create one more JBoss 4.2 Runtime. Hence, after choosing it click on <emphasis> <property>Next</property> </emphasis> button.</para> @@ -91,12 +91,12 @@ <property>Finish</property> </emphasis> returns you to the <link linkend="figure_create_seam1">New Seam Project wizard page</link>.</para> - <para>The next step is to define a Server that you can do by clicking on <emphasis> + <para>The next step is to define a Server by clicking on <emphasis> <property>New...</property> </emphasis> button in the <property>Target Server</property> section. In appeared <property>New Server dialog</property> the last server which matches the runtime will be selected.</para> - <para>All declared runtimes are listed in the combo box under the servers view. Here, you + <para>All declared runtimes are listed in the combo-box under the servers view. Here, you can indicate a server runtime that you need. Click <emphasis> <property>Add</property> </emphasis> if you want to add a new Server Runtime.</para> @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Next page allows you to verify the information for chosen server. Leave everything as + <para>Next page allows you to verify the information for a chosen server. Leave everything as it is and click on <emphasis> <property>Next</property> </emphasis>.</para> @@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ wizard</property>.</para> <tip> <title>Tip:</title> - <para>We suggest that you look through our <ulink url="&aslink;">AS manager + <para>We suggest that you look through <ulink url="&aslink;">AS manager guide</ulink> to find out more about runtimes and servers.</para> </tip> <figure> @@ -157,9 +157,9 @@ <para>Pass to the next section to find out more details on this dialog.</para> </section> <section id="projectFacets"> - <title>Select the Project Facets</title> + <title>Selecting the Project Facets</title> <para>The <property>Project Facets wizard</property> allows you to enable or disable - specific facets which define necessary characteristics for the project. In time you + specific facets which define necessary features for the project. When you switch to this wizard form, all critical facets are already checked for the chosen Configuration.</para> <para>Notice that this page of the wizard also allows you to set the necessary version for @@ -187,12 +187,12 @@ <para>To see all available Server runtimes click on <property>Runtimes</property> tab on the left. You can create a new one using the <emphasis> <property>New</property> - </emphasis> button. If more than one runtimes are checked here, the <emphasis> + </emphasis> button. If more than one runtime is checked here, the <emphasis> <property>Make Primary</property> - </emphasis> button won&apos;t be dimmed yet. So you can make use of it to mark primary + </emphasis> button won&apos;t be dimmed yet. Thus, you can make use of it to mark primary runtime.</para> <figure> - <title>Runtime Manipulations</title> + <title>Setting Runtime</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> <imagedata fileref="images/create_new_seam/create_seam_16.png"/> @@ -206,8 +206,8 @@ </section> <section id="configureJava"> <title>Java application building configuration</title> - <para>With this wizard you can define Java source directories, which will be generated on - build path. Also you can specify default output folder. If you are agree with default + <para>With this wizard you can define Java source directories which will be generated on + build path. Also you can specify a default output folder. If you are agree with default values, press <property>Next</property></para> <figure> <title>Java application building Wizard</title> @@ -220,11 +220,11 @@ </section> <section id="configureWebModule"> <title>How to Configure Web Module Settings</title> - <para> As we deal with a Dynamic Web Application we should first specify the top level + <para> As we deal with a Dynamic Web Application, we should at first specify the top level directory of our application for deploying it to a server afterwards. You know, this kind of application contains Web resources. Thus, it's important to indicate the content - directory. The wizard will put all those values itself. So you can leave everything as - it is.</para> + directory. The wizard will put all those values itself, so you can leave everything as + is.</para> <figure> <title>Web Module Settings</title> <mediaobject> @@ -239,11 +239,10 @@ </section> <section id="addJSFCapab"> <title>Adding JSF Capabilities</title> - <para>This wizard helps you to add JSF capabilities into your project for representing - appropriate behaviours associated with JSF. </para> + <para>This wizard helps you to add JSF capabilities to your project. </para> <para>Choose <emphasis> <property>Library provided by Target Runtime</property> - </emphasis> from Library Type list if you want have a default JSF implementation + </emphasis> from Library Type list if you'd like to use a default JSF implementation given by the present runtime.</para> <figure> <title>Adding JSF Capabilities to Web Project</title> @@ -253,7 +252,7 @@ </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>In case when you prefer to use your custom JSF implementation choose <property>User + <para>In case if you prefer to use your custom JSF implementation, choose <property>User Library</property> Item from Library Type list. In User Library list you can check required library.</para> <figure> @@ -264,7 +263,7 @@ </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> - <para> If you want to add new library click <property>Manage libraries...</property> ( <inlinemediaobject> + <para> If a new library is required, click <property>Manage libraries...</property> ( <inlinemediaobject> <imageobject> <imagedata fileref="images/create_new_seam/create_seam_17a.png"/> </imageobject> @@ -287,7 +286,7 @@ </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>To add proper <property>Library JARs</property> click <property>Add JARs...</property> + <para>To add proper <property>Library JARs</property>, click <property>Add JARs...</property> button and select the JARs on your hard drive. </para> <figure> <title>Selection Library JARs</title> @@ -297,7 +296,7 @@ </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Also you can download necessary JSF implementation libraries provided by Sun and Apache Foundation. For this you need click <property>Download...</property> (<inlinemediaobject> + <para>You can download necessary JSF implementation libraries provided by Sun and Apache Foundation as well. Click <property>Download...</property> (<inlinemediaobject> <imageobject> <imagedata fileref="images/create_new_seam/create_seam_23a.png"/> </imageobject> @@ -321,7 +320,7 @@ </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Finally, as we are arranging the Seam Web project, the last step we should do is to + <para>Since we are arranging the Seam Web project, the last step we should do is to adjust project configurations associated with the Seam.</para> </section> <section id="seamFacet"> @@ -343,8 +342,8 @@ </itemizedlist> <para>For that click on <emphasis> <property>Add</property> - </emphasis> button in the <property>General</property> section. Notice that in this - wizard presented below you can create a Seam runtime only for that version which was + </emphasis> button in the <property>General</property> section. Note, in the + wizard shown below you can create a Seam runtime only for the version that was selected in the <link linkend="projectFacets">Project Facets</link> wizard (version 1.2 in our case).</para> <figure> @@ -401,7 +400,7 @@ </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>On the other dialog you&apos;ll be asked to enter its name and description. And then + <para>On the dialog you&apos;ll be asked to enter its name and description. And then you should select a proper driver and adjust connection details. Press <emphasis> <property>Next</property> </emphasis> to preview all the adjusted settings and complete the creation of the new @@ -416,10 +415,10 @@ </figure> <para>The next block of settings in the Seam Facet wizard are describing a Database and a connection to it.</para> - <para>In the <property>Code Generation</property> section the wizard have already put the + <para>In the <property>Code Generation</property> section the wizard has already provided the names for your <property>Session Bean</property>, <property>Entity Bean</property> and - <property>Test</property> packages. Of course, you can change them into the others - which you like.</para> + <property>Test</property> packages. Of course, you can change them on others + of your choice.</para> <figure> <title>Code Generation Section</title> <mediaobject>