Author: smukhina Date: 2007-10-01 07:13:21 -0400 (Mon, 01 Oct 2007) New Revision: 3916 Modified: trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/AddBusinessProcess.xml trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/GettingStartedWithRHDS.xml trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/RADdevelopmentOfSimpleJSFapplication.xml Log: http://jira.jboss.com/jira/browse/RHDS-160 language correction Modified: trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/AddBusinessProcess.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/AddBusinessProcess.xml 2007-10-01 10:45:49 UTC (rev 3915) +++ trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/AddBusinessProcess.xml 2007-10-01 11:13:21 UTC (rev 3916) @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ process engine are two production-ready open source products supported by Red Hat. It is very easy to incorporate rules and business processes into a Seam web application using the Red Hat Developer Studio. In this section, we further re-factor the CRUD application we - already have and add support for an &quot;order management&quot; process. The user scenario is to + already have and add support for an &quot;order management&quot; process.User scenario is to simulate the following process and rules:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem>The site administrator logs in and sees a list of outstanding orders</listitem> Modified: trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/GettingStartedWithRHDS.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/GettingStartedWithRHDS.xml 2007-10-01 10:45:49 UTC (rev 3915) +++ trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/GettingStartedWithRHDS.xml 2007-10-01 11:13:21 UTC (rev 3916) @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ You only need to run &quot;alternative&quot; as a safe guard for the right JVM.</para> </note> - <para>Set this variable for the user account doing the installation and also for the user account that will run the server.</para> + <para>Set this variable for the your account doing the installation and also for the user account that will run the server.</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para>If you have more than one version of JVM installed in your machine, make sure you are using the JDK 1.5 installation as the default java and javac. You can do this using the alternatives system. The alternatives system allows different versions of Java, from different sources to co-exist on your system.</para></listitem> Modified: trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/RADdevelopmentOfSimpleJSFapplication.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/RADdevelopmentOfSimpleJSFapplication.xml 2007-10-01 10:45:49 UTC (rev 3915) +++ trunk/documentation/GettingStartedGuide/docs/userguide/en/modules/RADdevelopmentOfSimpleJSFapplication.xml 2007-10-01 11:13:21 UTC (rev 3916) @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ </keywordset> </chapterinfo> <title>RAD development of a simple JSF application</title> - <para>In this chapter you will see how to create a simple JSF application being based on <property>&quot;RAD&quot;</property> philosophy. We will create the familiar Guess Number application. The scenario is as follows. A user is asked to guess a number between 0 and 100. If the guess is correct, a success page is displayed with a link to play again. If the guess is incorrect, a message is printed notifying the user that a smaller or a larger number should be entered and the game continues.</para> + <para>In this chapter you will see how to create a simple JSF application being based on <property>&quot;RAD&quot;</property> philosophy. We will create the familiar Guess Number application. The scenario is as follows. You are asked to guess a number between 0 and 100. If the guess is correct, a success page is displayed with a link to play again. If the guess is incorrect, a message is printed notifying the user that a smaller or a larger number should be entered and the game continues.</para> <para>We&apos;ll show you how to create such an application from scratch, along the way demonstrating powerful features of Red Hat Developer Studio such as project templating, Visual Page Editor, code completion and others. You will design the JSF application and then run the application from inside Red Hat Developer Studio using the bundled JBoss server.</para> @@ -44,9 +44,9 @@ <section id="CreatingJSPPages"> <?dbhtml filename="CreatingJSPPages.html"?> <title>Creating JSP Pages</title> -<para>Our application has two pages. The first page is inputnumber.jsp. It prompts the user to enter a number. If the guess is incorrect, the same page will be redisplayed with a message indicating whether a smaller or a larger number should be tried. The second page is success.jsp. This page will be shown after the user guesses the number correctly. From this page you also have the option to play the game again.</para> +<para>Our application has two pages. The first page is inputnumber.jsp. It prompts you to enter a number. If the guess is incorrect, the same page will be redisplayed with a message indicating whether a smaller or a larger number should be tried. The second page is success.jsp. This page will be shown after you guess the number correctly. From this page you also have the option to play the game again.</para> -<para>On the first page inputnumber.jsp user will enter a number.</para> +<para>On the first page inputnumber.jsp you will enter a number.</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para>Open faces-config.xml file.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>Right click anywhere on the diagram mode.</para></listitem> @@ -56,14 +56,14 @@ <title>Create New View</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad3.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad3.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para>Type <emphasis>pages/inputname</emphasis> as the value for &quot;From-view-id&quot;</para></listitem> -<listitem><para>Leave everything else as is and click Finish.</para></listitem> +<listitem><para>Leave everything else as is and click <emphasis><property>Finish</property></emphasis>.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>In the same way create another jsf view. Type &quot;pages/success&quot; as the value for &quot;From-view-id&quot;</para></listitem> <listitem><para>Select <emphasis>File &gt; Save</emphasis></para></listitem> </itemizedlist> @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ <title>New Views</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad4.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad4.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ <title>Create connection</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad5.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad5.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ <title>Created connection</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad6.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad6.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ <section id="CreatingResourceFile"> <?dbhtml filename="CreatingResourceFile.html"?> <title>Creating Resource File</title> -<para>Red Hat Developer Studio allows to quickly create a resource file. Using this feature you can collect text messages in one central place. A resource file is just a file with a <emphasis>.properties</emphasis> extension. The messages stored in resource file can be displayed to the user on a Web page during application execution. </para> +<para>Red Hat Developer Studio allows to quickly create a resource file. Using this feature you can collect text messages in one central place. A resource file is just a file with a <emphasis>.properties</emphasis> extension. The messages stored in resource file can be displayed to you on a Web page during application execution. </para> <para>With resource file first, you don&apos;t hard code anything into the JSP pages. And second, it makes it easier to translate your application to other languages. All you have to do is to translate all your messages to the other language and save them in a new properties file with a name that ends with the appropriate ISO-639 language code.</para> <para>It is a good idea to keep your resources inside the <emphasis>JavaSource</emphasis> folder, where you keep your .java files. Every time you build the project, all <emphasis>.properties</emphasis> files will then be copied to the <emphasis>classes</emphasis> folder by default.</para> <itemizedlist> @@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ <title>messages.properties file</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad62.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad62.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ <title>Properties are added</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad63.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad63.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ </itemizedlist> <para>A java bean is created.</para> <itemizedlist> -<listitem><para>Declare the variable of user entered number:</para></listitem> +<listitem><para>Declare the variable of your entered number:</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> <programlisting role="JAVA"><![CDATA[Integer userNumber; ]]></programlisting> @@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ <title>Generate Getters and Setters</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad64.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad64.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ <title>Insert h:form</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad7.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad7.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ <title>Define id of form</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad8.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad8.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ <title>Created form</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad9.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad9.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -409,7 +409,7 @@ <title>Code assist</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad10.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad10.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ <title>Choose Value</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad11.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad11.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ <title>Selecting Value</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad12.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad12.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ <title>Created outputText component</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad13.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad13.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -470,14 +470,14 @@ <title>Add required attribute</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad14.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad14.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para>Click Ok, then click Finish</para></listitem> <listitem><para>Go to Source mode</para></listitem> -<listitem><para>Add the validation attribute to <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;f:validateLongRange&gt;</property></emphasis> for user input validation</para></listitem></itemizedlist> +<listitem><para>Add the validation attribute to <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;f:validateLongRange&gt;</property></emphasis> for your input validation</para></listitem></itemizedlist> <programlisting role="XML"><![CDATA[<h:inputText id="userNumber" value="#{NumberBean.userNumber}" required="true"> <f:validateLongRange minimum="0" maximum="100"/> </h:inputText> @@ -542,11 +542,11 @@ <title>Code Assist for &lt;f:param&gt;</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad15.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad15.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> -<para>This page, success.jsp, is shown if the user correctly guessed the number. The <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;h:outputFormat&gt;</property></emphasis> tag will get the value of success_text from the properties file. The {0} in success_text will be substituted for by the value of the value attribute within the <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;f:param&gt;</property></emphasis> tag during runtime.</para> +<para>This page, success.jsp, is shown if you correctly guessed the number. The <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;h:outputFormat&gt;</property></emphasis> tag will get the value of success_text from the properties file. The {0} in success_text will be substituted for by the value of the value attribute within the <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;f:param&gt;</property></emphasis> tag during runtime.</para> <para>At the end, we have a button which allows us to replay the game. The action value references a backing bean method. In this case, the method only terminates the current session so that when we are shown the first page, the input text box is clear and a new random number is generated.</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para>Switch to Preview mode to see how this page will look in browser:</para></listitem> @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ <title>success.jsp in Preview mode</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/newrad16.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/newrad16.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> @@ -591,36 +591,36 @@ <listitem><para>Play with the application by entering correct as well as incorrect values</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> <figure> -<title>A user is asked to enter a number between 0 and 100</title> +<title>You are asked to enter a number between 0 and 100</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/default.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/default.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> <figure> -<title>User input is validated and an error message is displayed if invalid input was entered</title> +<title>Your input is validated and an error message is displayed if invalid input was entered</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/default.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/default.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> <figure> -<title>After the user enters a guess, the application tells the user if a smaller or a larger number should be tried</title> +<title>After you enter a guess, the application tells the user if a smaller or a larger number should be tried</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/default.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/default.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure> <figure> -<title>A user guesses correctly</title> +<title>You guess correctly</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> - <imagedata scale="80" fileref="images/default.png"/> + <imagedata fileref="images/default.png"/> </imageobject> </mediaobject> </figure>