Author: mcaspers
Date: 2011-01-17 01:02:52 -0500 (Mon, 17 Jan 2011)
New Revision: 28280
Modified:
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/getting_started.xml
Log:
General Updates
Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/getting_started.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/getting_started.xml 2011-01-17
06:00:51 UTC (rev 28279)
+++ trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en-US/getting_started.xml 2011-01-17
06:02:52 UTC (rev 28280)
@@ -894,7 +894,7 @@
<section id="Collected_usage_information_guide">
<title>Collected usage information guide</title>
<para>
- Outlined is the information type being reported and the Goolge Analytics fieds
implemented to gather this information.
+ Below you will find an outline of the information that is reported and the Goolge
Analytics fields that are used to gather this information.
</para>
<variablelist>
<varlistentry>
@@ -1000,9 +1000,9 @@
<section id="Support">
<?dbhtml filename="Support.html"?>
<title>Support</title>
- <para>If you have comments or questions, you can discuss them at our <ulink
url="http://www.jboss.com/index.html?module=bb&op=viewforum&...
+ <para>If you have comments or questions, you can discuss them on our <ulink
url="http://www.jboss.com/index.html?module=bb&op=viewforum&...
Developer Studio Forum</ulink>.</para>
- <para>When writing to the forum for questions, please include the following
information:</para>
+ <para>When posting questions to the forum, please include the following
information:</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
<para>JBoss Developer Studio version</para>
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
- <para><property>JBDS</property> subscribers can get necessary support
on our <ulink
url="https://network.jboss.com/jbossnetwork/login.html">Support
Portal</ulink>.</para>
+ <para><property>JBDS</property> subscribers can get additional
support on our <ulink
url="https://network.jboss.com/jbossnetwork/login.html">Support
Portal</ulink>.</para>
</section>