Author: tromanovich
Date: 2008-04-29 06:12:10 -0400 (Tue, 29 Apr 2008)
New Revision: 7883
Modified:
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/first_seam.xml
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/getting_started.xml
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/jsp_application.xml
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/rad_jsf_application.xml
Log:
http://jira.jboss.com/jira/browse/JBDS-235 - Guide review
Getting Started Guide reviewing and changing.
Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/first_seam.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/first_seam.xml 2008-04-29
09:19:49 UTC (rev 7882)
+++ trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/first_seam.xml 2008-04-29
10:12:10 UTC (rev 7883)
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
technologies from the list. Here, for this project, we will select Dynamic Web
Module, Java, JavaServer Faces (JSF), and Seam Facet for
a typical database-driven web application. The default project facets should
suffice, click on <property>Next</property>.</para>
- <figure>
+ <figure id="ProjectFacetsSpecifyingScreen">
<title>Project Facets Specifying</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>In this screen you can also bring up server runtimes panel by clicking
<property>Show Runtimes</property> in the bottom right corner.
+ <para>In the <ulink url="ProjectFacetsSpecifyingScreen">Project
Facets Specifying</ulink> form you can also bring up server runtimes panel by
clicking <property>Show Runtimes</property> in the bottom right corner.
This panel shows available server runtimes. Then this button will be changed into
<property>Hide Runtimes</property> one.</para>
<para>Click <property>Next</property> to proceed
further.</para>
Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/getting_started.xml
===================================================================
---
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/getting_started.xml 2008-04-29
09:19:49 UTC (rev 7882)
+++
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/getting_started.xml 2008-04-29
10:12:10 UTC (rev 7883)
@@ -18,6 +18,9 @@
required to use JBoss Developer Studio to develop on JBoss Enterprise Middleware
and/or Red Hat
Linux. But, many find these pre-configured tools offer significant time-savings and
value, making
them more productive and speeding time to deployment.</para>
+ <para>This guide covers the first steps to get started working with JBoss
Developer Studio. You will learn how to install and
+ configure necessary software for your OS (operating system).</para>
+ <para>Thus this guide will provide you with detailed info on how to start JDK,
JBDS and JBoss Tools.</para>
</section>
<section id="ConfigJavaEnvironment">
@@ -25,7 +28,7 @@
<title>Configuring Your Java Environment</title>
<para>You must have a working installation of JDK 5 before you install JBoss
Developer Studio.
Currently it will only fully work with a 32-bit JVM, not a 64-bit JVM. On a 64-bit JVM
the visual
- editor fails to launch. Thus in this guide we will show you how to install a 32-bit
Sun JDK 5.0
+ editor fails to launch because of feature of OS architecture. Thus in this guide we
will show you how to install a 32-bit Sun JDK 5.0
on a Linux Platform and Microsoft Windows Platform.</para>
<section id="InstallJDK50onLinux">
@@ -36,7 +39,7 @@
<para>Download the <ulink
url="http://java.sun.com/javase/downloads/index_jdk5.jsp">Sun JDK 5.0
(Java 2 Development Kit)</ulink> from Sun's website. Choose
"JDK 5.0 Update
<x>" (where "x" is the latest update
number) for
- download and then select "RPM in self-extracting" file for Linux.
Read the
+ download and then select "Red Hat Package Manager in
self-extracting" file for Linux. Read the
instructions on Sun's website for installing the JDK.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -233,7 +236,7 @@
<note>
<title>Note:</title>
- <para>JBoss Developer Studio needs Java 5 and doesn't work with gij
Java.</para>
+ <para>JBoss Developer Studio needs Java 5 and "gij"
isn't available on every platform.</para>
</note>
<itemizedlist>
Modified: trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/jsp_application.xml
===================================================================
---
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/jsp_application.xml 2008-04-29
09:19:49 UTC (rev 7882)
+++
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/jsp_application.xml 2008-04-29
10:12:10 UTC (rev 7883)
@@ -179,16 +179,14 @@
]]></programlisting>
<para>If you come back to design mode you will see that the changes made are
automatically reflected in that mode.</para>
- <para>Actually you don't really need to do any configurations right
now. You can clear the
- web.xml file, save it and you'll still be able to launch your
- application.</para>
+ <para>Actually you don't really need to do any configurations right
now.</para>
</section>
<section id="DeployTheProject">
<?dbhtml filename="DeployTheProject.html"?>
<title>Deploying the project</title>
<para>While creating any web project you could experience a pain writing ant
scripts and
- managing the packaging even if a developer is writing the most trivial web
+ managing the packaging even when writing the most trivial web
applications. With JBoss Developer Studio you are saved from such a pain. All you
need is to start JBoss server and launch your application in your favorite
browser.</para>
<para>You can also create a war archive with JBDS's Archive Tools and
export it
Modified:
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/rad_jsf_application.xml
===================================================================
---
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/rad_jsf_application.xml 2008-04-29
09:19:49 UTC (rev 7882)
+++
trunk/documentation/guides/GettingStartedGuide/en/modules/rad_jsf_application.xml 2008-04-29
10:12:10 UTC (rev 7883)
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>Click <emphasis>
<property>Add</property>
- </emphasis> button</para>
+ </emphasis> button for adding new attribute to your resource
file</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Type <emphasis role="italic">
@@ -295,6 +295,14 @@
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
+ <para><emphasis>
+ <property>Up</property></emphasis>
+ and <emphasis>
+ <property>Down</property>
+ </emphasis> buttons allow you to move you attribute on the list. For
delete the attribute, choose it and press <emphasis>
+ <property>Delete</property></emphasis>
button.</para>
+ <para>If you want to change a value or a name of your attribute, click on
it and than on <emphasis>
+ <property>Edit</property></emphasis> button.</para>
</section>
<section id="CreatingJavaBean">
@@ -545,7 +553,7 @@
<section id="EditingTheJSPViewFiles2">
<?dbhtml filename="EditingTheJSPViewFiles2.html"?>
<title>Editing the JSP View Files</title>
- <para>Now, we will finish editing the JSP files for our two
"views" using
+ <para>Now, we will continue editing the JSP files for our two
"views" using
Visual Page Editor.</para>
<section id="EditingInputjsp">
<?dbhtml filename="EditingInputjsp.html"?>