Re: [aerogear-dev] Updated wording for the staging site

On Sep 21, 2012, at 7:41 AM, Jay Balunas <jbalunas(a)redhat.com&gt; wrote: > > On Sep 20, 2012, at 11:45 PM, Glen Daniels wrote: > >> >> Wow, that's a lot to pack into a tag line, Jay. :) > > yup :-) > >> >> Hm. "The AeroGear Project: Open-source tools for mobile developers. >> Simple, secure connectivity to your backend." ("Project" implies we're >> still building it?) > > I like this approach. My only problem with this one, and any tagline trying to fit everything you want to convey Jay, is that the tagline, a button and the image need to fit on a mobile device screen. They do flip to a vertical orientation but that's pretty long. I think simple is going to be better here. I don't think we need to spell out every bit of the project in a tagline, just it's essence … that's what the rest of the home page is for. :)

> >> >> --Glen >> >> On 9/20/12 5:04 PM, Jay Balunas wrote: >>> Hi All, >>> >>> Trying to work out the new wording for the tagline on the front page >>> of the site. Right now it says "JBoss Focused Resources for Mobile >>> and HTML5". >>> >>> Couple issues with that. >>> >>> 1) We don't want to lead off with "JBOSS" as the client libraries are >>> really for the native developers (web, hybrid, native(ios, android)). >>> The server impl should not be first word. >>> >>> 2) It is not very descriptive about what or why developers would want >>> to use AeroGear. >>> >>> A few points: >>> >>> * Libs are "your way" so maybe something something like "Access to >>> secure persistence the way you expect it". >>> >>> * There is more to come. So if we can work in some wording or >>> impression that this is just the beginning... >>> >>> * Not just JBoss AS as the backend, but cloud based with openshift, >>> and even using ruby >>> >>> * Cordova and hybrid should be mentioned - its an important part of >>> our eventual plans, and it not in the graphic >>> >>> * HTML5 is important, but could almost be assumed when talking about >>> mobile web >>> >>> * our libs are handling the plumbing, making it easier to develop >>> >>> Any idea's out there for a good way to put this together for a tag >>> line? I'll think on it more and post some ideas too... >>> >>> -Jay _______________________________________________ aerogear-dev >>> mailing list aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org >>> https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev >>> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> aerogear-dev mailing list >> aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org >> https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev > > _______________________________________________ > aerogear-dev mailing list > aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org > https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev _______________________________________________ aerogear-dev mailing list aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev