3:54 p.m.
Author: dgeraskov
Date: 2007-11-29 09:54:23 -0500 (Thu, 29 Nov 2007)
New Revision: 5150
Modified:
trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/crud_application_walkthrough.xml
Log:
http://jira.jboss.com/jira/browse/RHDS-312
Modified: trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/crud_application_walkthrough.xml
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--- trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/crud_application_walkthrough.xml 2007-11-29
14:30:02 UTC (rev 5149)
+++ trunk/seam/docs/reference/en/modules/crud_application_walkthrough.xml 2007-11-29
14:54:23 UTC (rev 5150)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>Select a Server in the wizard <emphasis><property>Run on
Server </property></emphasis> and click
<property>Finish</property></para>
+ <para>Select a Server and click
<property>Finish</property></para>
<figure>
<title>Select a Server</title>
@@ -68,11 +68,11 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>After the previous steps you can use CRUD application to select, delete or
update date from <property>employee</property> database.</para>
+ <para>After that you can use CRUD application with
<property>employee</property> database.</para>
- <para>You can use internal JBDS Web Browser or your external Web Browser
with the same link.
(<emphasis>http://localhost:8080/crudapp/home.seam</emphasis>)</para>
- <para>Click on the <emphasis><property>Employees
List</property></emphasis> link and observe that data from DataBase
<emphasis><property>employee</property></emphasis>
selected.</para>
+ <para>You can use internal JBDS Web Browser or your external Web Browser
with the same link (<ulink
url="http://localhost:8080/crudapp/home.seam">http://localhost:8080/crudapp/home.seam</ulink>).
</para>
+ <para>Click on the <emphasis><property>Employees
List</property></emphasis> link and observe that data from
<emphasis><property>employee</property></emphasis> database are
displayed.</para>
<figure>
<title>Employees List</title>
<mediaobject>
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>Use <property>Employees search parameters</property>
fields to filter selected list.</para>
+ <para>Use <property>Employees search parameters</property>
fields to filter the selected list.</para>
<para> Press <property>Select</property> opposite one of
employees.</para>
<figure>
@@ -95,10 +95,8 @@
</figure>
- <para> Press <property>Edit</property> to Edit employees
fields.</para>
- <para> Enter <emphasis>Login</emphasis> and
<emphasis>Password</emphasis> to login. (Use
<emphasis>"Crudapp-user"/"secret"</emphasis>
for example)</para>
- <para> After this you will be loged in to the server and it will not ask
you to enter login and password if you decide to carry through the same steps
again.</para>
- <para> Link
<emphasis><property>Login</property></emphasis> in the right top
corner will be changed on label <emphasis>Welcome, crudapp-user</emphasis> and
link
<emphasis><property>Logout</property></emphasis>.</para>
+ <para> Press <property>Edit</property> to edit employee
fields.</para>
+ <para> Enter
<emphasis><property>Login</property></emphasis> and
<emphasis><property>Password</property></emphasis> to login. (Use
<emphasis>"crudapp-user"/"secret"</emphasis>
for example)</para>
<figure>
<title>Login page</title>
@@ -116,9 +114,8 @@
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para> Insert opposite
<emphasis><property>firstname</property></emphasis> your name and
press <property>Update</property>.</para>
- <para> Record in DataBase will be updated.</para>
- <para> See that field
<emphasis><property>firstname</property></emphasis> also updated
on the screen .</para>
+ <para> Fill in
<emphasis><property>firstname</property></emphasis> and press
<property>Update</property>.</para>
+ <para> Database will be updated.</para>
</section>
</chapter>