Author: smukhina Date: 2009-04-30 17:58:25 -0400 (Thu, 30 Apr 2009) New Revision: 13983 Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/albumView.xml trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/errorsReports.xml trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/navigationPanel.xml trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/usedComponents.xml trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/getting_started.xml Log: https://jira.jboss.org/jira/browse/RF-398 language is checked in updated Photo Album chapters Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/albumView.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/albumView.xml 2009-04-30 21:55:38 UTC (rev 13982) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/albumView.xml 2009-04-30 21:58:25 UTC (rev 13983) @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ <section> - <title>Image Size control with &lt;rich:inputNumberSlider&gt;</title> + <title>Image Size Control with &lt;rich:inputNumberSlider&gt;</title> <para> The <emphasis role="bold"><property>rich:inputNumberSlider</property></emphasis> component in the Photo Album Demo is used as a control that helps a user to change photos size while previewing an album. A handler position on the slider track corresponds to a particular value of an image size. @@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ ...]]></programlisting> <para> - The described above example implements a modal panel with photos that change each other in order they store in an album. + The described above example implements a modal panel with photos that change each other in the order they are stored in an album. </para> <figure> <title>Slide show</title> Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/errorsReports.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/errorsReports.xml 2009-04-30 21:55:38 UTC (rev 13982) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/errorsReports.xml 2009-04-30 21:58:25 UTC (rev 13983) @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ <section id="errorsReports"> <title>Errors Reports</title> <para> - The Photo Album application has a global mechanism of checking errors. - You will be informed about the error each time it occurs. + The Photo Album application has a global mechanism for errors checking. + You become informed about the error each time it occurs. It is possible because the main page of the application <code>web/src/main/webapp/index.xhtml @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ </para> <para> The <code>addToErrors()</code> method is annotated with <code>@Observer</code> annotation, - so it observes all events with <code>ADD_ERROR_EVENT</code> constant and adds errors to the + thus it observes all events with <code>ADD_ERROR_EVENT</code> constant and adds errors to the <code>errors</code> List. </para> </section> Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/navigationPanel.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/navigationPanel.xml 2009-04-30 21:55:38 UTC (rev 13982) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/navigationPanel.xml 2009-04-30 21:58:25 UTC (rev 13983) @@ -35,12 +35,12 @@ The <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;rich:treeNodesAdaptor&gt;</property></emphasis> component has a <emphasis><property>&quot;nodes&quot;</property></emphasis> attribute that accepts a collection of elements, so <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;rich:treeNodesAdaptor&gt;</property></emphasis> - iterates over the collection and renders hierarchical tree structure on a page. + iterates over the collection and renders a hierarchical tree structure on a page. </para> <para> According to the &quot;Shelves - Albums&quot; hierarchy we need two nested <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;rich:treeNodesAdaptor&gt;</property></emphasis> components. - The first one iterates through the Shelves collection + The first one iterates over the Shelves collection that is returned from the <code>getPredefinedShelves()</code> method: </para> <programlisting role="JAVA"><![CDATA[... @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ ...]]></programlisting> <para> The second <emphasis role="bold"><property>&lt;rich:treeNodesAdaptor&gt;</property></emphasis> component - iterates through the Albums collection of the current Shelf which is available via + iterates over the Albums collection of the current Shelf which is available via <emphasis><property>&quot;var&quot;</property></emphasis> attribute. The <emphasis><property>&quot;var&quot;</property></emphasis> attribute is used to get access to the data object of the current collection element Shelf, @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ ...]]></programlisting> <para> - The illustration below shows how the navigation panel for a guest is rendered on the page. + The image below shows how the navigation panel for a guest is rendered on the page. </para> <figure> @@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ </rich:treeNodesAdaptor> ]]></programlisting> <para> - To provide drop functionality for the marked albums we should mark Shelves as drop zones in the application code too. + To provide drop functionality for the marked albums, we should mark Shelves as drop zones in the application code too. For this purpose we add the <emphasis><property>&quot;dropValue&quot;</property></emphasis> and <emphasis><property>&quot;acceptedTypes&quot;</property></emphasis> attributes to the &quot;Shelf&quot; node: </para> @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ so the &quot;Shelf&quot; node can accept it. </para> <para> - Finally we need to specify listener in the <emphasis><property>&quot;dropListener&quot;</property></emphasis> + Finally we need to specify a listener in the <emphasis><property>&quot;dropListener&quot;</property></emphasis> attribute in order to process drop on the server side: </para> <programlisting role="XML"><![CDATA[<rich:tree dragIndicator="dragIndicator" dropListener="#{dndManager.processDrop}"> @@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ </rich:tree>]]></programlisting> <para> - The illustration below shows how the described above drag-and-drop features are rendered in the Photo Album. + The image below shows how the described above drag-and-drop features are rendered in the Photo Album. </para> <figure> <title>Dragging the &quot;Flora&quot; album from &quot;Sport&quot; shelf into the &quot;Nature&quot; (left) and the tree after drag-and-drop (right).</title> Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/usedComponents.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/usedComponents.xml 2009-04-30 21:55:38 UTC (rev 13982) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/includes/usedComponents.xml 2009-04-30 21:58:25 UTC (rev 13983) @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ </row--> <row> <entry>&lt;a4j:poll&gt;</entry> - <entry>The component allows periodical sending of Ajax requests to the server and is used for a page updating according to a specified time interval.</entry> + <entry>The component allows periodical sending of Ajax requests to the server and is used for a page update according to a specified time interval.</entry> </row> <row> <entry>&lt;rich:calendar&gt;</entry> Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml 2009-04-30 21:55:38 UTC (rev 13982) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/application_overview.xml 2009-04-30 21:58:25 UTC (rev 13983) @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ </programlisting> <para>The snippet above shows that the <code>index.xhtml</code> page does not contain sources for application functional parts but includes them as templates that are rendered depending on conditions and events taking place during user interaction with the Photo Album Demo. - The illustration below shows <code>index.xhtml</code> page schematically with all its &quot;includes&quot; and paths to them:</para> + The picture below shows <code>index.xhtml</code> page schematically with all its &quot;includes&quot; and paths to them:</para> <mediaobject> <imageobject> <imagedata fileref="images/indexxhtml.png"/> Modified: trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/getting_started.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/getting_started.xml 2009-04-30 21:55:38 UTC (rev 13982) +++ trunk/docs/realworld_app_guide/en/src/main/docbook/modules/getting_started.xml 2009-04-30 21:58:25 UTC (rev 13983) @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ <listitem> <para> <emphasis>Import the project into your IDE</emphasis>. - You can just deploy Photo Album application on the server, but + You can just deploy Photo Album application onto the server, but the convenient way is to import the project into your IDE. We recommend Eclipse with JBoss Tools since this bundle is more preferable to ensure rapid development process with Seam and RichFaces.