Hi, Very interesting ! Congrats ! But maybe there are a bit too much screenshots,especially the "eclipse" screenshots. i.e, the ones just showing code could be replaced by textual code snippets and other just showing "Run configurations ..." are maybe overkilled.

An alternative could be to skip most of the screnshots and add a screncast.

Just my 2 cents, Seb On Wed, Oct 31, 2012 at 8:00 PM, Lucas Holmquist <lholmqui(a)redhat.com&gt; wrote: Hi, I just finished a "first draft" of "Communitizing"(thanks jay) the JBDS Android Cordova Tutorial. http://staging.aerogear.org/docs/guides/CordovaAndroidDevJBDS/ I think it could benefit from slicing it into some sections. feedback? -Luke _______________________________________________ aerogear-dev mailing list aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev _______________________________________________ aerogear-dev mailing list aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev

+1 Don't get me wrong, the tutorial is excellent. It's better to have a lot of screenshots than not enough. I was just trying to give some personal opinions ;) And indeed, an good screencast is hard to do and has be to taken as a "bonus" rather than the core material of a tuto.

Seb On Wed, Oct 31, 2012 at 10:06 PM, Douglas Campos <qmx(a)qmx.me&gt; wrote: On Oct 31, 2012, at 6:30 PM, Sebastien Blanc wrote: > Hi, > Very interesting ! Congrats ! > > But maybe there are a bit too much screenshots,especially the "eclipse" screenshots. > i.e, the ones just showing code could be replaced by textual code snippets and other just showing "Run configurations ..." are maybe overkilled. There's lots of things we take for granted that are in fact needed for newcomers. Screenshots are a big part of it. > > An alternative could be to skip most of the screnshots and add a screncast. -Infinity Screencasts are overrated - the worst thing is to catch yourself seeking a video to see stuff and not being able to copy/paste code from it - one of the reasons of http://asciicasts.com/ big success over railscasts.com :) > > Just my 2 cents, > > Seb > > > > > On Wed, Oct 31, 2012 at 8:00 PM, Lucas Holmquist <lholmqui(a)redhat.com&gt; wrote: > Hi, > > I just finished a "first draft" of "Communitizing"(thanks jay) the JBDS Android Cordova Tutorial. > > http://staging.aerogear.org/docs/guides/CordovaAndroidDevJBDS/ > > I think it could benefit from slicing it into some sections. > > > feedback? > > -Luke > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > aerogear-dev mailing list > aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org > https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev > > > _______________________________________________ > aerogear-dev mailing list > aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org > https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev -- qmx _______________________________________________ aerogear-dev mailing list aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev _______________________________________________ aerogear-dev mailing list aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev

On Oct 31, 2012, at 5:06 PM, Douglas Campos <qmx(a)qmx.me&gt; wrote: > > On Oct 31, 2012, at 6:30 PM, Sebastien Blanc wrote: > >> Hi, >> Very interesting ! Congrats ! >> >> But maybe there are a bit too much screenshots,especially the "eclipse" screenshots. >> i.e, the ones just showing code could be replaced by textual code snippets and other just showing "Run configurations ..." are maybe overkilled. i was thinking that when i was putting it together, but as qmx said, new users could benefit. maybe we could break it up into sections for example, all the eclipse setup in one article, and the app creation in another > > There's lots of things we take for granted that are in fact needed for newcomers. Screenshots are a big part of it. >> >> An alternative could be to skip most of the screnshots and add a screncast. > -Infinity > > Screencasts are overrated - the worst thing is to catch yourself seeking a video to see stuff and not being able to copy/paste code from it - one of the reasons of http://asciicasts.com/ big success over railscasts.com :) > >> >> Just my 2 cents, >> >> Seb >> >> >> >> >> On Wed, Oct 31, 2012 at 8:00 PM, Lucas Holmquist <lholmqui(a)redhat.com&gt; wrote: >> Hi, >> >> I just finished a "first draft" of "Communitizing"(thanks jay) the JBDS Android Cordova Tutorial. >> >> http://staging.aerogear.org/docs/guides/CordovaAndroidDevJBDS/ >> >> I think it could benefit from slicing it into some sections. >> >> >> feedback? >> >> -Luke >> >> >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> aerogear-dev mailing list >> aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org >> https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> aerogear-dev mailing list >> aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org >> https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev > > -- qmx > > > _______________________________________________ > aerogear-dev mailing list > aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org > https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev _______________________________________________ aerogear-dev mailing list aerogear-dev(a)lists.jboss.org https://lists.jboss.org/mailman/listinfo/aerogear-dev